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Although it seems interesting, it is not really my taste, it is quite funny as well.
I recommend though that you go through the writers guide for a few tips on your writing style.
This chapter is a "wall of Text", which means there are no spaces between dialogues and paragraphs, which it should have.
These, for example, are more than 1 character talking. Which means there needs to be a white line between each character speaking.
Like this.
6400549 I can see exactly what you mean now.
I have word setup on my tablet to do all the extra spaces between lines and paragraphs automatically, but it never even occurred to me here, just took it for granted...
All part of learning I guess, thanks for the feedback though, it's always welcome.
LOVE IT.
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Thank you
I hope you love the following chapters too
6401996 I hope our heros are nut running in to any big cats. That lack to firepower for that hunt.
6402135, I wouldn't be that cruel to them.
Yet... >:)
They practiced, right?... Right?
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They are trundling through fields and the odd house at this very moment
Great!! Keep them coming!!!
Wait there's six of them
How many people does it take to properly man a tank ?
Driver
Gunner ( is gunner also loader ?)
Radio ( right ?)
Tank commander
Anything else ?
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On a T-34, to properly pony the tank you need a crew of four
Commander (who doubles as gunner)
Loader
Hull Gunner (who doubled as radio operator)
Driver.
But don't worry, no pony is being left out
6613914 Ah I see
6613914 thank you for clearing that up
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No worries :)
Everypony will have a seat in the end!
I'm not sure about this, but isn't her name supposed to be "Fleur de Lys", like the flower/sign of royalty? And how did everypony forget about the tank in Applejack's old barn? I know that an affair between Rainbow Dash and Big Macintosh is quite a big deal, but come on! There's a machine of war capable of destruction beyond anypony's imagination hidden under a thin layer of straw! Imagine if the Cutie Mark Crusaders would find it! XD
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Yeah, I had to check the spelling on that twice myself, but it appears her name is spelt Dis Lee, not the French De Lys... Reckon I prefer the French one, and that's me speaking as a Brit! But official is official I suppose...
As for the tank and Dashie trying to have an affair with Big Mac (popular guy), stay tuned for the next exciting episode of My Little Panzer!
6617170 Oh. Well, I didn't expect that, but who knows what those crazy Americans mean with 'Dis Lee'...
Aaaanyways, I want to congratulate you for this amazing piece of art! I've read a few MLP X World of Tanks/Girls and Tanks crossover, but this one tops 'em all! I just hope that this project won't be abandonned, for that'll be truely an unfortunate turn of events for all of the Bronyfandom... Thank you so much! ;-)
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Thank you
I afraid my head won't fit in my hat anymore...
6617361 What do you mean? 'm sorry, it's just that English isn't my native tongue, and I still haven't quite grasped all of the different allusions and metaphors yet... ^^'
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Not to worry, I thought your English is excellent, I would never have guessed it wasn't your first language.
As for my head not fitting in my hat, it's a turn of phrase, means your compliments are making my head swell with pride :) I'm glad you're enjoying it so much, thank you for the vote of confidence
6618065 Meh, you know, a knack for languages and a couple years of intense youtube-watching does wonders to one's English skills. I wish it would be as easy for Flemish than it was for English, but you can't have everything, right?
That... actually makes alot of sense! Uuuh, have to remember this one... And you're welcome! But I don't really see my comments as compliments, you know? After all, a sentence pointing out the truth is called a 'statement', isn't it? ;-)
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lol, now I know you're just trying to get me to hurry up and produce chapter 3 :)
6620822 What? Me? Never!
Well, it's true that I am quite impatient to see how the events will unfold, to be honest... But I, of all persons, know that a rushed story is a (potentially) bad story, so take all the time you need! I have plenty of it to spend on 'Fallout: Equestria', which means that I won't be bored for a few days. Maybe. ;-)
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lol, better get my finger out then :)
Amen to getting it done rather than quickly. :)
"“BUGGER!”" That would suck LOL
RD is saluting like you do in the US, but they're all Nazi ponies (The Panzer division is of the Nazi German Tank Forces), so they should be saluting more like this
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I know, but 'panzer' supplants 'pony' a lot better than 'tank' in the tune, and the girls in a Panzerkampfwagon VI Ausf E (Tiger 1 to you and me) is the best pic I could find on Deviant Art, well there are others of a higher quality, but they're a bit dark. There was also one of Dashie with a soviet T-34/85, but I just kinda preferred this image. More cartoony.
And as none of the girls actually serve in the wermacht, I really can't see them giving a Nazi salute...
6674904 True, although they are wearing uniform, have to blame that on the artist though.
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Agreed, let's go blame him :) Thanks again for the follow and I hope you enjoy the stories.
6674971 It's no problem, I might enjoy your stories
Girls und Panzer meets MLP.. my brain has officially crapped itself.
The very concept is so mind shreddingly insane as to come all the way around to being awesome.
So many tanks. So much awesomeness
And that's how the Equestrian first Calvary was born !
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Thanks for saying it's awesome, sorry about the mess in your brain though, not too bad is it?
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"Friendships Own" is rolling!
6679839 friendships own ?
If you could command any tank, what would it be ?
Edit:never mind the first question
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Any tank at all?
Hmmm... good question, so many to choose from...
It's got to be a Panther. Or a Chieftain. Or a Cromwell or a Crusader... maybe Sherman Easy 8
Can I have several?...
6679885 my top picks
Hell cat, Stuart, Sherman easy 8, sherman jumbo,and firefly
And yes you may have several
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Huzzah! I suppose if I had to have just one of those mentioned, it would (for the moment) be the Panther, and a really good mechanic
But yeah, sneak a Hellcat in there for joy rides, Open topped! Everypony be jealous of my tank swagger!
6679906 ah yeah
Tanks kick ass
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KV-2 is Stronk Tenk. Comrade Stalin guides my aim as reward for sending dissidents to Gulag.
I joke, but I used to play WoT in the OLD days when the KV-2 and the Derp Gun were upgrade parts for the KV. And yes, I spent most of my time Ridin' Derpy.
These days if I'm playing, it's World of Warships, I want my Yamato so I can tool around singing the theme to Space Battleship Yamato while blowing people up at 30 km. Who am I kidding, I mean missing people at range my secondarys couldn't even miss at.
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World of Warships! I used to play that!
Or at least I pretended to by driving a TOG2 in World of Tanks, HMS Thunderthighs we called her
There was nothing like me and a couple of mates, our rolling squadron of TOGs!
Then my PC died a death and that was that...
Hmmmm. You know what? The princesses need one of these.
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Because Leo=fucking awesome
Ether that or a freaking Abrams or Leo two. Because they are OP gods who need OP tanks :D
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As cool as things like a Leo, an Abby, or a Chieftain are (and they are), I'm going to limit the girls to WWII vintage I'm afraid... Anything that at least reached prototype by August 8th 1945, the date of Japanese surrender, is eligible.
At least for this series...
6719693 I know I know, Im just joking around. I bring it up because well…I have this friend, he's a software Dev. He hacked the War Thunder servers a few years back and snuck in A Leopard 2 and an F/A-18. He gave me the client side stuff to access them and for a year I made dummy accounts because I kept getting banned for playing 'em.
The Tiger is a great tank, but good luck beating a Leo 2 that can hit you on the move from over 2 klicks away. I had so much fun with that. Too bad they finally found the hidden shit on the server and removed it. It was fun while it lasted.
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The ones with the best crews of course.
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Hmmm, I can't seem to find a KV-6, all my lists seems to jump from KV5 to KV7...
Was it a tank destroyer version?
Official panzerfahren rules let you include only WWII vintage vehicles, anything that was at least prototyped by August 8th 1945 :)
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Find Me in the Alps... That thing existed?
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The T-34 out class's the rest of the tanks by far.
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Eeeyup, it's a tier V vehicle, the others are only III or IV...
Oooh, the T-34 just got destroyed by the Hetzer! Just like a famous youtuber said : The Hetzer gotta Hetz!