Chapter 1 Has Been Heavily Edited

Thanks to Alcatraz, Bleedingraindrops, Scarlet Firesong Wolf for editing the first chapter. Hopefully these people will move onto chapter two next and make it more bearable. You guys will not believe how readable chapter one is now, it actually looks as if an English speaking person wrote it!

Hopefully they'll finish chapter 2 up and I can send them chapter 3 (which is almost done btw).

I think I'll keep the chapters relativly short for this story, so that I can get them out quickly of course. If you guys haven't read Lazarus you'd see that chapters for that story can go from 8K to over 15K word, it's insane.

But hey that doesn't mean this story may have a chapter that big, but for plot this story's taking. I don't see its chapters getting that big any time soon.

But hey, if you guy's would like check out the new edited chapter one (a few things been changed/moved around nothing too plot breaking. It doesn't even break it really), and look at the wonderful work these two gentlemen and lady did for me!

Alcatraz, Raindrops, and Scarlet. I'm honored to have you three as editors, and because of this: I myself will carry you to The Gates of Valhalla, where you shall ride eternal. Shiny and CHROME!

Comments

[Scarlet_Firesong_Wolf]

I feel so special~

[Scarlet_Firesong_Wolf]

TO VALHALLA!!!