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Yonah21


I write POE's, and HIE's mostly. I hope you all enjoy my work.

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  • 449 weeks
    Story

    So sorry for the delays. I keep getting distracted by my novel which is almost at the 8th chapter. I'm not abandoning my fanfic, I just am having trouble still. Just letting you know.

    6 comments · 573 views
  • 454 weeks
    To Return Home :)

    Letting you know I am making major progress with the story. I am about halfway done or so with the newest chapter :twilightsmile:

    3 comments · 327 views
  • 455 weeks
    Ten Little Critters

    Ten little critters, all gathered and looking fine.
    One choked on pride, and then, there was nine.

    Nine little critters, practically served on a plate.
    One spoke poorly, and then there were eight.

    Eight little critters, those passed now in heaven.
    One took fright, and then, there were seven.

    Seven little critters, one surrounded by chicks.
    One roused anger, and then there were six.

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    11 comments · 331 views
  • 455 weeks
    Cue evil laugh

    Thanks to my good friend RedShirt047 I have something planned for you all. A little mystery. And no, it's not something I mentioned in the past that I won't really do. I've already put work into this and got the plot all together.

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    4 comments · 318 views
  • 455 weeks
    Story

    Okay. I want to let you know a reason why this story has been delayed so much. A big part is because a while ago my brother rather blasted the recent chapter I was going to put up. It really crushed my spirits, which made me stop writing it. Figured you all need to know. That being said, I got a page done by now in the newest chapter. And yes, I still plan for the scene to be a bit similar to

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Jul
20th
2015

Being honest · 6:07am Jul 20th, 2015

I have to say I'm having a hard time writing. This story is getting harder and harder to do, and I have a lot of ideas but I am having a harder time actually putting them into words. If this continues I don't know if I can keep doing this.

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Comments ( 7 )

*hug* Don't worry. We believe in you.

3253466 That's not enough when the author doesn't believe in himself.

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You should be more confident. I've seen how well you can write and how much you've improved.

I remember when you posted that picture
Commission: Sugarcube Corner
Maybe you can cut it up into Micha's journey/quest and related side stories

Well if this story is getting harder to do, you could always take a break and maybe do a few one shots or start another story this way your not just constantly working on one story and getting burned out on it.

Though if you need someone to bounce ideas off of or vent a bit feel free to drop me a pm.

So far it´s a hell of a sequel, perhaps some side chapters testing the patience of Micah?,knowing that his girlfriend could be in danger or dead? all the while living with the mane 6?

Yeah, I see where you are coming from man. I can only recommend sketching out your ideas down on paper (or word/libre/celtx etc), divide them up and start making comparisons to them before finding out where to go from there. I'd like to think of it as cleaning the gutter, instead of thinking about it over and over again where it could forever be stuck, just get them out of your head and into text format and really rough them out, don't get concerned about grammar, spelling or even plot holes (yet) at this point especially and keep it completely and extremely small and simple as needs be, working on the most important act of the scene, and most of all, avoid being fancy. At the very least you'll gain a differently perspective of your ideas.

I don't know what techniques or strategies you have tried already, bare in mind.

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