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vren55


The reason I write is because I want to read a story written for myself. One day, I want to read one of my own stories and say to myself "That is the best story I have ever read."

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  • 58 weeks
    Apparently this Exists and I only just found out about it

    So I know a few people have read the book aloud but this is probably got the furthest and one of the best made.

    Unfortunately, it's not complete but Straight to the point has a pretty good voice when reading it! I hope you all enjoy

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Jul
28th
2012

Reconstruction and Revamp · 3:38am Jul 28th, 2012

Welllll Hello... good and bad news

Bad first:
Story revamp/rewrites taking a long time. I still have yet to correct all of the issues EQD has with me. Right now I'm just rewriting for voice and background, attempting to get rid of long boring prose and make the story more character driven. = more character interaction (which is a good thing, but i'm wondering if I'm putting in TOO much dialogue). Expected to get rewrites done sometime in the middle of august.

Good:
Since EQD gave me the go ahead in terms of my plot, the story is remaining unchanged in terms of plot. Still canterlot, still the same characters, maybe developed a little differently, but once the rewrite comes out you will not have missed too much. Still you would want to re-read the chapters. Another piece of good news is that I have 9000 words worth of chapters that have not been proof-read yet, but are on standby to be proofread after I finish rewrites. So chapter releases after the rewrites would be faster for a time.

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Comments ( 7 )

Pst, I read it.
Love the plot, and I think it'll turn out even better with it gets more character-driven.

254707 :pinkiehappy: AWESOME. Like and Fav plox :pinkiehappy:. Btws, do you know any more good proof readers? I got a few, but not all of them get online. Additioonally, do you know any artists who work for free? I might as well order a cover art for the story to catch ppl's eye on EQD if I am doing all these rewrites.

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Hnm, proofreaders? Author Support has that "List of People that can Help You" thread. I know there's tons of reliable blokes there that can help you out. As for art... I have no idea! :pinkiehappy:

254756 Author support? Oh RIGHT the group I helkp with XD... So busy with the fic and holiday that I completely forgot we had that thread.

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