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MiloBlackwood


Just a depressed kid wanting to have people read his works of fiction, also wouldn't mind doing a colab on a story or two

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  • 224 weeks
    Get this....

    So get this. Just re watched rainbow rocks right and I was thinking how it was oddly familiar, it reminded me of a story I wrote back in 2011 on a different site. So I progress through the movie which lets be honest here, it was ok but needed a lot of work done. I admit it's for the target audience of little kids. But seriously.

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  • 269 weeks
    Spell check and Grammar help, also the flow of the story

    I have not written a new story in a long time and would like to have a little bit of help with the spelling issues and grammatical issues that seem to be apart of my stories, plus if anyone would like to read my new story before I submit it and tell me where I can improve that would be a great help to me when I write because I only do this on the weekends and a little bit during the week because

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  • 304 weeks
    I think I might be leaving the fandom for a while

    I have been thinking about leaving the mlp fandom, there have been a lot of determining factors for me just by watching the show, I kind of lost interest after the mid season finale for this season (5) I have been a fan since the beginning and that was thanks to one of my best friends.

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  • 323 weeks
    The day that stopped

    Hey guys, thanks to the people who read this storyThe day that stopped

    I would like some feedback on what I need to improve upon and just constructive criticism. ive written stories on FimFiction before, but this is one where I would like to have some feedback.

    A little bit about this story:

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  • 392 weeks
    proofreading for stories could someone help with this

    I have decided to start writing stories again on here, one thing wrong with this. I can't pass the mods and what not, grammar and punctuation issues on my part. If someone could take the time to read over my stories and tell me where I need to improve a paragraph and so on, that would be much appreciated if not then oh well right

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2015

The day that stopped · 8:41pm Jul 10th, 2015

Hey guys, thanks to the people who read this storyThe day that stopped

I would like some feedback on what I need to improve upon and just constructive criticism. ive written stories on FimFiction before, but this is one where I would like to have some feedback.

A little bit about this story:
It was a personal story that I had trouble writing because I hope this never happens in my lifetime.

This story came about when I got a text from my mom who was joking around. I asked where is everyone then she replies dead.

So this all started out as a joke, a dark one at that.

If anyone wants to give me any feedback on this story (good or bad) or justs wants to tell me what I could improve on, that would be very much appreciated

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