TThe Sun & the Rose
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
An English knight married a kindly woman, touched in the head, who thought she was an alicorn. She was right.
Human
Celestia
OC
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470 weeks
Final edit done!

I've gone through S&R, and I'm pretty proud of what I've got here. There minor edits all over the place, but some parts have undergone some narrative changes.
Chapter 5 changes:
- Some tweaks of Gareth's dialogue when he met Gleaming Horizon.
- Some tweaks of Celestia's dialogue at breakfast.
Chapter 9 Changes:
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470 weeks
Editing, editing, editing

So, here's what's going down.
Before I publish the next chapter, I'm going to be going over S&R from top to bottom, editing the whole damn thing. I've already gone through chapters 1, 2, 3 and 4.
Why? Because I'm a perfectionist arse and also it'll make the ending better if I write it with everything fresh in my mind. Hopefully.
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472 weeks
Looking for grammar nazi

Keeping this one short. I'm looking for someone who's up for giving me a hand in beta'ing what's left of The Sun & the Rose. The story is nearly done, and my grammar specialist has currently stepped down. I'm sure that anyone who has read any of my stuff out the box will realise that it's... not as carefully proof-read as it could be.
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480 weeks
Humanity's Greatest Pastime: Sequel?

Porn, amiright?
In the haze that was the few weeks after HGP's posting, I couldn't believe what was happening. Likes after likes, comment after comments, hell, it's been the most consistently favourited work that I have right now. Going through all this though, I kept reading comments that people wanted to know what happened next. They wanted a sequel.
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484 weeks
A dramatic reading? A dramatic reading!

So... I just found this on the internets.
Why is it that nobody tells me of these things? Seriously, I nearly had a heart attack when I saw this. Personal bias aside, it was very well read. Should anyone know about fan works of my stuff, I'd love to link them up.
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Apr

22nd

2015

Editing, editing, editing · 12:56pm Apr 22nd, 2015

So, here's what's going down.

Before I publish the next chapter, I'm going to be going over S&R from top to bottom, editing the whole damn thing. I've already gone through chapters 1, 2, 3 and 4.

Why? Because I'm a perfectionist arse and also it'll make the ending better if I write it with everything fresh in my mind. Hopefully.

In any case, I intend to finish S&R by the end of May, 2015. Of course, now that I've jinxed it, that probally won't happen, but that's the intent.

As usual, comments, questions and threats go below.

Peace.

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