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soulpillar


RP writer and Spacebattles

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  • 470 weeks
    Final edit done!

    I've gone through S&R, and I'm pretty proud of what I've got here. There minor edits all over the place, but some parts have undergone some narrative changes.

    Chapter 5 changes:
    - Some tweaks of Gareth's dialogue when he met Gleaming Horizon.
    - Some tweaks of Celestia's dialogue at breakfast.

    Chapter 9 Changes:

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  • 470 weeks
    Editing, editing, editing

    So, here's what's going down.

    Before I publish the next chapter, I'm going to be going over S&R from top to bottom, editing the whole damn thing. I've already gone through chapters 1, 2, 3 and 4.

    Why? Because I'm a perfectionist arse and also it'll make the ending better if I write it with everything fresh in my mind. Hopefully.

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    4 comments · 484 views
  • 472 weeks
    Looking for grammar nazi

    Keeping this one short. I'm looking for someone who's up for giving me a hand in beta'ing what's left of The Sun & the Rose. The story is nearly done, and my grammar specialist has currently stepped down. I'm sure that anyone who has read any of my stuff out the box will realise that it's... not as carefully proof-read as it could be.

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  • 480 weeks
    Humanity's Greatest Pastime: Sequel?

    Porn, amiright?

    In the haze that was the few weeks after HGP's posting, I couldn't believe what was happening. Likes after likes, comment after comments, hell, it's been the most consistently favourited work that I have right now. Going through all this though, I kept reading comments that people wanted to know what happened next. They wanted a sequel.

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    17 comments · 609 views
  • 484 weeks
    A dramatic reading? A dramatic reading!

    So... I just found this on the internets.

    Why is it that nobody tells me of these things? Seriously, I nearly had a heart attack when I saw this. Personal bias aside, it was very well read. Should anyone know about fan works of my stuff, I'd love to link them up.

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Looking for grammar nazi · 4:11am Apr 7th, 2015

Keeping this one short. I'm looking for someone who's up for giving me a hand in beta'ing what's left of The Sun & the Rose. The story is nearly done, and my grammar specialist has currently stepped down. I'm sure that anyone who has read any of my stuff out the box will realise that it's... not as carefully proof-read as it could be.

I use Google drive and will be passing out links to interested parties before the chapter goes up. Other than that, back to work for me.

Chapter 14 should be up within 24 hours time.
Chapter 15 will be done by the end of the week.

Progress!

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Comments ( 9 )

Heil grammar!

I'm good with grammar. Not grammar Nazi good, but it's one of my core writing skills.

Looking for grammar nazi

You rang?

Write on,
Legion

I'd like to help, but I'm not so sure about my editor skills...

I'd be down to help.

I'm a formatting nazi too! I can help point out syntax inconsistencies like differences in writing styles between paragraphs!

Or if you misspelled stuff, or forgot a space, I can do that too. :pinkiecrazy:

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Holy crap.

First of all, I'm blown away by the offers on show here, thank you all. Second, I bundled up chapter 14 in a PM to Shadeol and Legion222, expecting to maybe get a response in a few days or so. I certainly wasn't expecting both of them to complete it within three hours.

In all, both Shadeol and Legion222 did an amazing job of proof-reading the draft, and I will gladly write them a recommendation if they approve of it. Hell, I'll write a drabble for them if they like. Both of them showed their own capabilities and if they weren't trying out for the same job, I'd have picked them both. Unfortunately, much like Highlander, there can be only one.

Legion222, fall in soldier. You're my kind of nit-picker.

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Jawohl, herr kommandant!

Sorry, 2957569. In another world, we could have been friends. But as the good author said, there can be only one. *BANG* (jk :raritywink:)

I look forward to being able to help this great story as it moves forward.

Write on,
Legion

2960464 Thanks for the compliment and the opportunity to help. :twilightsmile: I'm used to helping my guild our with raid strats, so it's always nice helping people proofread to make sure things are understandable.

2960669 Until next we meet again. :raritywink:

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