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WritingSpirit


Try again. Fail again. Fail better. (Ko-Fi / Tip Jar)

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  • 99 weeks
    New Story Up!

    I'm still writing here, apparently! Go me!

    Econfluence / / cousinry
    Spitfire and Sunburst are cousins. They're an unlikely pair, but they make do with what they have.
    WritingSpirit · 9.3k words  ·  16  2 · 358 views


    it's not weird, i swear

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  • 103 weeks
    some cover arts

    Hi there! Been hellishly busy lately, especially now that everything's returning to some variation of normal.

    Did a fair bit of ponywords in spite of that, both new and old. Though I haven't really been keeping you guys up to date on the deetz since... Christmas, looks like. Time to rectify that.

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  • 122 weeks
    Merry Christmas!

    I had been busy prepping something thematic for the occasion but alas, I couldn't finish in time.

    So have another story instead!

    EIn Aisling-On-High, She Gently Shines
    "For there is no greater comfort than knowing there’s somepony in your life who wants to take care of you."
    WritingSpirit · 4.6k words  ·  18  2 · 561 views

    As for the Hearth's Warming story, maybe it'll come out soon. Who knows? :raritywink:

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  • 133 weeks
    some random albums 3: Spooktober Edition


    me figuring out how to burn Sweet Apple Acres down

    It's that time of the year once again!

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  • 135 weeks
    a quick September / October check-in

    First off, not dead! That's a start!

    Second off, got vaxxed, which may or may not have played a part in the whole not being dead thing. Aftermath of the first jab was hell. Second one apparently was too, according to my upper arm. Otherwise, all's good!

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Jul
15th
2012

Rapprochement: The Preview! · 7:14am Jul 15th, 2012

6 weeks have passed since I first posted Laurels. It seems all of you readers really liked it! I really appreciate all these comments you're giving.
In the meantime, I'm in front of my desktop, drinking coffee, toying with Illustrator a little. That's pretty~ much about it.

Of course, the next chapter is still underway. I've done one tiny portion (which is not really tiny) of it. Here's a sneak peek!:


Shards of glass filled the floor, joined by an oval, wooden board. Applejack lifted it up, immediately staring into her cracked reflection.
"What the hay happened here?"

Something ruffled through her tail, making her freeze with a nervous turn.
A small rabbit looked back at her. The orange pony sighed in relief.

"Celestia it's only you, Angel." she laughed.
"Where's Fluttershy?"

The usual, deadpanned frown on the rabbit's face wasn't there, replaced by an expression of terror and panic.
Applejack felt dread stinging in her gut. Something was wrong.
"Is she here. Is Fluttershy here?"
The rabbit responded with a frantic nod.

A loud shatter made her turn, looking up the stairwell.
"Fluttershy?" she yelled out, trying as fast as she could to gallop up the steps despite her throbbing hoof.

She stopped as a loud scream erupted into the hallway. The sounds of crashing and breaking of wood soon joined after. A menacing shadow flashed through the light on the walls, seemingly tearing drapes of cloth.
The snarling and growling died down, prompting Applejack to go closer.
"Fluttershy?"

The orange pony gasped in horror. Fluttershy's room was in shambles, the floorboards broken and potted with holes. Her bed was ripped, the pillow lying in a mountain of feathers. The curtains dangled from the side, the cloth that once hung there now lying on the fallen cupboard, completely torn apart.
The silhouette of a pegasus panted and heaved, sunlight trenching onto her yellow, wrathful face.


Still needs a little touching up, but otherwise its alright.
This part is inspired (unexpectedly) by this song: Blaze - Indecisive (from Balloon Party)
Go get Balloon Party's 100% No Feeble Cheering and After Party now. Really, the album is great for fans of Knife Party, Skrillex etc. There's not really much calm music in those, which usually spurs me to write some of the chapters, but it's cool.

I'm considering writing a few one-shots to pass the time.
If I only had a good idea right now...

Anyways, be sure to give a few tips on the story!

P.S. I really popped a balloon on the previous blog post :pinkiehappy:

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Comments ( 3 )

... Damn, can't read the preview till I'm all the way though the story!

Uh oh... looks like the Mirror Mare is after Fluttershy now...

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