Some Thoughts On Writing Clopfics · 5:49am Apr 4th, 2015
I need to come up with more ways to say 'breasts'.
Case in point, I felt vaguely limited by Sweating The Spread because I knew Fluttershy wasn't the type to say, knockers, melons, lady bits unless she's really horny. She does get horny through out the fic but this isn't a story of exploring one's body with a partner or two. She has to keep it together. Until she doesn't, haha.
Anyhoo, here is some excerpts from Adventures in Editing (or why it took me four days instead of two to post).
Spoilers! If you haven't read Sweating The Spread, get to it.
Fun fact, the title was inspired by the fact I decided to go with a photo shoot scenario for the contest and the first fic I came across when I googled the name. (I like my titles to stand out. Shut up about Sipping.) It was called Spread and involved a Rarity that got wrapped up in taking dirty pictures for Playcolt and eventually, moving on up. Despite the interesting premise, the story is pretty fluffy and saccharine. *wiggles nose in disgust* Sure, there are some steamy parts but it's far too fluffy for my taste. I like my characters to revel in being dumbasses and being forthright.
This is almost NSFW so mind yourselves.
Fluttershy released a breath of air she didn't know she was holding and tried to sit the product on the floor. Instead, the cap of the container stuck itself between the green ribbon of her bikini, seemingly glued by her sweat and the tight moist space between them. Her fingers took a hold of the handle and pulled. The motion only jigged her breasts and slid the product back and forth between her sweaty mounds. Her breasts bounced off the momentum once, twice and then a final time before the product fell with a loud splat.
I could have posted this two days ago. I thought long and hard about it and decided that I could do better. This scene here has two jobs. To foreshadow the paizuri (tittyfucking) that will happen later and to plant the idea in the staff of the room. At this point at time, I was playing around with the idea of having several males and females later on, ride Fluttershy's tits into the sunset. But a couple of rewrites changed my mind as I wanted to get closer to 'they fuck' and 'they're fucking and omigosh my feelz'.
Currently Sweating The Spread leans more to 'they fuck' side of a clopfic but I gave it the good college try, I did.
Bleach The Heat and Heat The Bleach are the two non-starters of a few drafts. I wanted to start the fic with the argument between Rainbow Dash, Lightning Dust and Fluttershy but everytime I did, the story would end there. There wouldn't have been a action.
If you were wondering who Shutter Bug was, think no more!
Clearly the answer is to only write gay stuff.
jk obv.
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Yeah... I completely agree... after three more het!fics. Okay, four more. I got a lot of requests to follow up on.