A short review of Sir Hat's "RED" · 1:08am Mar 22nd, 2015
Yay, yet another clopfic portraying the gender-variant as liars and tricksters who are there to deceive men into having sex with them. Sure, there's a much shorter story segment afterwards (two very short chapters) trying to make up for that. No, it's not enough, primarily because the bullshit came first and there's seriously no substance or apparent effort whatsoever to the rest. Not that there's much obvious thought or effort given to the first chapter either.
Also, it's the same goddamn human x pony clop Sir Hat (and everyone else) always writes, except that this time the one caveat to it is this.
And of course it's featured.
p.s. Read the comments to see Sir Hat in his new (self-instated) role as the Gender Police!
p.p.s. No link, because "Mature" (which this story honestly isn't). You'll find it in the feature box.
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What's wrong with traps? Some people like traps. Some people like traps and are also traps. People like me.
Personally, my review would have contained paragraphs 2, 3, and Twilight.
No thank you
"You are not allowed to link to Fimfiction on Fimfiction." ~
knightyprobably google adsenseEh, me and Sir Hat have held a long-lived love-hate respect for one another... that delightful pre-modern sandwich of a writer. Then again, I don't read his clop.
And I don't read all of his work.
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W-what?
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At least you're honest about it. The first step is admitting there's a problem
I actually would have totally overlooked this one if you hadn't pointed it out, since I rarely check the feature box. I find most things I read through groups or friend recommendations.
And in this case...
It was the same bland, dry stuff that Hat normally writes. I don't care for his style at the best of times, and the comment section suggests I wouldn't care for him personally, either. The rapey/abusive dirty talk is a huge turnoff for me, too. And all the trouble the story went through just to have the human regret having sex with her was a bit ridiculous as well.
Yeah, wasn't missing anything by overlooking it.
His comment-grammar makes me cringe.
I don't want to think of the bone-tremors I'd get digging into the actual writing. *shudder*
At least it's a silly shitfest in the comment section xD
I wish IncinerateChicken was unbanned :/ Then we'd have a party.
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Oh, he got perma'd? Eehh, I can live without that brand of poster.
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And what a boring life it is :/ Though the comments have a couple runners-up to that throne, it seems.
I miss my most virulent and entertaining follower though.
We should have collabed on this review because Sir Hat sucks.
Men are tricked into having sex? Huh.
Though I wouldn't know, I am far too oblivious for even direct approaches to work.
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"Hi, please have sex with me."
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"Haaaa, you're funny. Like people are that forward. What should we get for lunch?"