Be honest · 5:18am Mar 19th, 2015
Do you guys think that I've been a little too hard on the heroes lately? Especially Junior? Is there too much drama right now? I ask so that I can figure out a good place to lighten up the mood for awhile for The Arrogance of Man and mixed things up a little. I planned that to start on chapter 23. Is that soon enough?
There are time I have to say yes. Junior at times been have the worst time along with the other Transmutant Heroes.
I think you should bring in a light moment to balance that out, yet don't stray to much away from the tone of your story. The last thing you need in your story is mood Whiplash for your readers.
2891814 Have to agree him, you should have a light moment to balance out the darker grittier stuff soon to come.
2892043 I'll see what I can come up with.