There is Another Sky - Minor update · 2:38am Mar 19th, 2015
So... because I wasn't terribly happy with how quickly the ending rushed through things, coming to what was a deus ex machina, I have decided, instead, to replace it with a different ending.
If you're interested in reading the ending alone, search for the following sentence:
“I know what you say is right. Now. But not forever.”
It will take you right to the part that changed.
If you want to get to the beginning of the ending:
Shelly’s voice preceded her hand on Celestia’s neck.
It is, in the end, about another 800 words long. It is not necessarily replacing the ending with a better one, but a different one that is less of a rushed ending.
If you were really, really attached to the original ending, let me know and I can... I dunno, stuff it in a blog or something.
Toodles!
Rewrite everything!
This is how I deal with stress. I fix things. Or try to.
(and I'm keeping the last two digits of my blogs even with my followers) Because reasons.
I wouldn't have said it was necessary, but it doesn't dilute things, so I guess it works. The new scene with Shelly and Will might drag things out a bit, but you did expand on one thing that I felt was a little unclear (and now I can't remember what it was despite having just reread it, so just take your "good job!" and be done with it! :V)
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