More Vinyl x Tavi hatebdsm: full speed ahead. · 5:22am Mar 3rd, 2015
okay, so after much head ache and indecision, I finally have a story concept that I've developed over the past 3 days from start to finish. All that it Actually needs to be is written.
Octavia Has a simple proposal for Vinyl Scratch.
She has to last one week. One week of servitude in the Cellist’s domain. One week of following humiliating orders. One week of placating the vengeful Octavia, who hates and bullies Vinyl with a dedication that nears close to insanity. One week of it, and Octavia will pay for all of Vinyls current and future school debts and DJing equipment. No strings attached.
Vinyl isn't sure she can swallow her pride and suffer through Octavia's revenge fantasies. But with the option to walk out at any time, she’s more than willing to at least test her mettle.
How bad could it possibly be from her normal antics after all?
general BDSM themes as usual. Humiliation. Pet Play. Spanking. and delicious emotional turmoil. expect it some time this week or next.
Im also in need of a Editor if anyone is willing.
I'd edit for you, but I've got a lot on my own plate right now, and I'd feel... awkward... editing your work.
2845473 The boners only mean my story is doing its job.
2845474 Nah it's not that. I'm just a little awkward writing or editing erotica. I tried it once on fanfiction, and I was just too embarrassed to de either.
ALL OF MY YES!
Also, while not the best in the grammar department, I will offer my limited services.
I'd give editing a shot, I've edited/co-wrote a few scenes in the clop department. Nothing major, just something I've done for kicks really.
I'm also bored since I just lost my job.
Having some tiny part of romance in there would be fantastic :)
I look forward to it
How is this 'revenge' for Octavia? Has Vinyll wronged her in the past or something? I'm also kinda finicky about themes like this because the power remains in Vinyll's hands, after all, she can quit and just work for her money. One the other hand, I have an unholy love for themes like this.
Lastly, I can offer my services as a proofreader. I have experience with proofreading fics, but I can't help you if you're looking for solely an editor.
2846218 It is something that will be explained in the story for sure, but to put it simply, Octavia feels she has very valid reasons to spite Vinyl as she does. Finding out exactly why is apart of the story.