A new oneshot preview · 12:22am Jan 28th, 2015

Dont worry, my other fics will get their turn, but this one cover image inspired me to pen this oneshot I'm currently working on.

Meatheads

Cover Image

Here's a taste:

Rainbow paced nervously around her living room. Not much would bring her to such a state, but if there was one thing that made her nervous, it was anything Wonderbolt related. She had already made it into the reserves, and had impressed both Soarin and Spitfire on more than one occasion. However, this was different. This time, she'd managed to get both captains of the Wonderbolts over to her house for dinner to discuss the future of the organization. A future that could very well include a young, ambitious pegasus with an 'unique' mane and a never-say-never attitude!
If this dinner went well, that is.
Let's see, I fed Tank, made dinner, set the table, cleaned up the house, showered, brushed my mane and tail, found a bottle of the prissiest wine Rarity could think of... I think this is gonna work!
Try as she might, she couldn't shake the nagging feeling that she'd forgotten to do something. She took a quick look around. The meal was neither romantic, nor friendly, it was all business. A simple casserole of her mother's recipe.
Oh, duh! I got a letter from Mom and Dad! she thought, heading over to the stack of mail waiting for her on the counter. She usually plucked out the bills and aviation magazines, and tossed the rest in the trash. Only by chance did she happen to see the writing on the letter.
She opened it quickly and began reading. Dash only had time to get through the greeting before a knock drew her attention. At altitude, her only visitors were pegasi, and she had a good idea of who these two might be.
Rainbow tucked the letter in a drawer and stopped to check her mane in the reflection of her kettle. She inhaled deeply, and exhaled slowly.
"Alright, Dash, you got this. They're your friends!" she said to herself as she strolled through her living room to answer the door.
On three. one... two... three!
She opened the door, and put on her best smile. A smile that quickly faded as her hoof let go of the handle. Before her stood a mountain of muscle, six stallions in all, as big as Bulk Biceps or bigger, each a different color. Some wearing sunglasses at 8:30 at night, others in tank tops emblazoned with one of many gyms or bodybuilding competitions.
As soon as the massive stallions saw her, they all grinned.
"Lil D!" they shouted in unison. Dash's vision blurred, and faded to black.
Her brothers had come to visit.

So in summation, Rainbow's 6 older brothers are all muscle heads and they come visit her for a while, causing embarrassment, lols and a bit of lesson learning. My aim here is to be episode like. What do you think?

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