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Alcatraz

Come with me, and you'll be, in a world of pony procreation...

Alcatraz Joined 31st Aug, 2013 · Offline

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  • 61 weeks
    People like this are honestly hilarious

    Today, I got a certain message, one that I've had a few times in the past.

    It's about a random person who I've never met, complaining about a comment I left on an M-Rated incestuous story, wherein I said "incest is wincest".

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    1 comments · 346 views

  • 68 weeks
    A Long Overdue Update

    A fair few people have been asking when I'll get around to continuing The Evil Paradox.

    Short answer is, I will.

    The long answer? The last couple years haven't exactly been kind to me for a variety of reasons that I don't really want to get into, but what I will say is that it has a lot to do with finances and mental health.

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    4 comments · 393 views

  • 109 weeks
    Monster Hunter is such a time sink

    200 hours in two and a half months of one of my favourite games of all time, sorry-not sorry I haven't written a single damned word of anything lately I've just been having way too much fun for what feels like the first time in years that isn't the toxic fucking cesspool that is Overwatch.

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  • 116 weeks
    Soon~

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  • 119 weeks
    finally fucking finished

    This chapter of TEP has just been one headache after another.

    Imagine trying to complete a 5000 piece black and white gradient puzzle and having it take two years to do.

    I don't know how much of a shit-show this chapter actually is until I get it sent off to be edited.

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    4 comments · 334 views
Nov
27th
2014

Feedback · 6:42am Nov 27th, 2014

So that picture is cropped from the gdoc of POHL chapter 3 (It's literally the beginning, the rest of the document is the outline).

What I'm after at the moment, before I proceed any more, is if I'm trying to hard to portray Jenny as a cute little five-year-old filly, or if the current third person POV I'm going for is working or not.

Lemme know if I need to tone it down or not

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Comments ( 1 )
LoneUnicornWriter
LoneUnicornWriter #1 · Nov 27th, 2014 · · ·
Reply

I actually think its fine. The third person isn't going bad from what I'm seeing.

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