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Alcatraz


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  • 61 weeks
    People like this are honestly hilarious

    Today, I got a certain message, one that I've had a few times in the past.

    It's about a random person who I've never met, complaining about a comment I left on an M-Rated incestuous story, wherein I said "incest is wincest".

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  • 68 weeks
    A Long Overdue Update

    A fair few people have been asking when I'll get around to continuing The Evil Paradox.

    Short answer is, I will.

    The long answer? The last couple years haven't exactly been kind to me for a variety of reasons that I don't really want to get into, but what I will say is that it has a lot to do with finances and mental health.

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  • 109 weeks
    Monster Hunter is such a time sink

    200 hours in two and a half months of one of my favourite games of all time, sorry-not sorry I haven't written a single damned word of anything lately I've just been having way too much fun for what feels like the first time in years that isn't the toxic fucking cesspool that is Overwatch.

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  • 116 weeks
    Soon~

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  • 119 weeks
    finally fucking finished

    This chapter of TEP has just been one headache after another.

    Imagine trying to complete a 5000 piece black and white gradient puzzle and having it take two years to do.

    I don't know how much of a shit-show this chapter actually is until I get it sent off to be edited.

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Nov
27th
2014

decisions decisions... · 3:20am Nov 27th, 2014

So I'm writing the third chapter of Promise Of Her Life, and I've had an idea.

I've gotten to the part of the story where it's going to revolve primarily around Jenny. Initially I wanted to write the remainder of the story from both the first-person point-of-view from The Doctor And Jenny (although stipulating whose POV it is to avoid confusion). What I intended on doing with the POV from Jenny, is while she's little for the next couple of chapters is to capture that cute, child-like innocence from her character like in Fallout Equestria: Pink Eyes with Puppysmiles.

The realization comes from the idea that first person narration tends to trip me up, but the more I think about it the more I'm thinking I can keep the Jenny portions third person narration but still have that child-like innocence in the narration itself.

What do you guys think? First person, or third person? What do you think would be better or easier to read?

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Comments ( 2 )

I say third cause it's easier to write, unless you'd like a challenge.

I think first person would be cool!

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