Final Draft of Red Wings Chapter 1 · 5:01am Jun 20th, 2012
Whew! After some seriously heavy editing, Chapter 1 is finalized and in it's full, awesome form. There aren't any major changes, just simply some technical work. Which leads me to another round of thank-yous!
First, Warden Pony. You're like my own personal Jesus, man. You went into this story and tore it apart, finding it's every fault and foible, and now I feel like it's a complete draft. Thank you so, so much for all the help. You're one of the best editors I know, and your input is invaluable as a long-time fan of End of Ponies as well.
Second, another big thank you to shortskirtsandexplosions, RazgrizS57, and TheBrianJ for the additional input and technical know-how. Once again, you all came to aid me in my time of need, like some calvary charge full of editing power. Thanks again to all of you.
This finalized draft is heading for Equestria Daily. Wish me luck!
- Props