Oct
18th
2014
A Tad Screwy opinions anyone? · 1:33am Oct 18th, 2014
I haven't gotten much legitimate feedback on A Tad Screwy in a while, so I'm gonna do the same thing I did with Friendship Splits and ask for actual, in depth opinions on it.
To my knowledge, A Tad Screwy is the only Screwball-centric Equestria Girls fic on FIMfiction...and the only Equestria Girls fic with Screwball in it at all for that matter. Wow, that's depressing.
But one particular thing I can say I'm not really happy with in this fic, is that I made everyone swear waaaaaaay too much. I tried to get as close to real-life high school kids behavior as possible, but as it progressed, I kinda realized I was over-selling it, and found myself doing it less and less.
God, I kinda wish the reviewing groups would pay attention to my stuff. ;(
i actually like it a lot. it was the first story of yours that i read.
2539931 Awww, nice to hear it. Thank you!
Hmmm... Yeah, I think the swearing is a bit much, but that's easy enough to tone down! Honestly, I'm loving the fic though.
2539931 same here!!!! in fact,this story is how i found you on fimfiction,and i loved it so much,that i decided to read some of your other stories,and i started with "spears of chaos:wrath of screwball",and damn,what a story!!!!pleas make more chapters for it!!!!and also for friendship splits and screwball:chaos strikes back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2540713 I'll try to get new chapters for spears of chaos out not long from now.I've written the next chapter a few times over, but I've never been happy with the end product. I'll try to get back to that soon.
I agree. It is kinda sad that this is the only screwball eqg story. In fact, if you want to help me I plan on making my own at some point.
2540980 Just tell me what you want from me, and I'll see how I can help.