Siege Luna! Siege Luna! Siege Luna!
(On mobile forgive any errors) I'm trying to develop a Gundam tabletop system from D&D 5e stat and skill system. I'd like to run test sessions with it and hammer out any problems before planning a full campaign with it, I'm here looking for volunteers. While experience in 5e would be nice, the system is really intuitive and easy to learn how to use, I can teach you so experience is not needed.
I'm gonna split this list into three lists, Monsters I want imported to world, new monsters made from scratch and new subspecies/deviants of monsters already in the game. Also Tigrex and Nargacuga, have been confirmed already, so they aren't in my lists.
I'm doing a second draft of a short story. A lot of non-mecha fans where confused with the first draft because I wrote it without anticipating much confusion from those unfamiliar with the tropes of mecha. I'm attempting to make the second draft to be easier to understand for a general audience.
Mecha btw being giant piloted robots in war setting.
I got a first draft for a Writing class assignment done. It's my first time using an Omniscient narrator and I'd like some criticisms.
Also It stars a character I'm planning on writing a whole book about in the future and I'd like some criticisms on her.
If you're interested Pm me and I'll pm you the link to the Gdoc.
the reading done by latte punch
With this new reading I have decided to finally get off my lazy flank and continue writing for whispers of instinct (and because im having writer's block with my other projects) and I have an editor for it now he is scalor barracuda cyborg so for the fans of whispers of instinct I will finish and it is this guy to thank for it
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9 weeks and waiting
2656169 im sorry I got caught up in Vengeful Guardians after im done with the first chapter of that im writing a chapter of whispers of instinct where scootaloo consoles spike
2656212 its ok honestly I just found your story today and I'm just very impatient but I still look forward to more
2656233 yeah and im still looking for an editor for whispers
2656324 I would help but I'm not an editor and since I'm not a grammar Nazi I wouldn't even know how to edit sorry
2656324 oh wait but I also read some comments on here where people said it was blog posts and groups on here that are editors looking to....well edit hopefully that helps
2656378 also ive been thinking about canceling and rebooting whispers of instinct to a spikealoo fic with instead of shadow spike to more like the lizard in the gauntlet
basically this
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your thoughts
2656973 hmmm idk(not tryin to be a dick) I can't speak for everyone but I always see a lot of spike stories with such great premises dropped before they develop like when I saw your "still to come" chapter I was like holy shit BADASS he's going against celestia and everyone and I really like that the only other one I saw like that was rise of spike the dragon(I think) and that one is going through a long update period so I would understand if you rewrote this but I personally love your premise with the shadow dragon but even if you change it.....I'll still read it because spike is the best
2656986 alright I'll stick with my current plans also I had plans involving him fighting that spectral alicorn created by the elements in eqg2 and at one point revives nightmare moon and after nm steals lunas power over the moon spike basically does this
2657020 so if I'm interpreting that right your gonna have spike basically..absorb him or fuse with him and gain their powers
sounds pretty awesome 
but I have a question.....the 'ship here is it mane 6 harem cmc harem or both or....what? And also does Luna die when this happens 
Luna best pony and celestia is a tyrant 
2657029 cmc harem I thought spike calling them whores made it clear my bad naw she wont die (luna is best princess fuck celestia luna used to be (to me) best pony before eqg2 now its sunset shimmer) she will just left in powerless state with a bond to spike as in she can hear his thoughts and feel his pain whatnot
2657039 cmc harem nice
and how bout we throw Luna in as an addition to his harem 
since she best pony and can relate to his pain closer then the rest.....and also since she is best pony 
oh and eqg2 is that new or is that the rainbow rocks one or a comic or am I missing something?
2657045 I don't know im having trouble getting applebloom and sweetiebell in. Eqg2 is rainbow rocks
2657453 http://www.fimfiction.net/manage_user/groups?group_name=editor that's the editors group and how to include them idk umm would it make sense to have to rest of the cmc show up and see the aftermath of the fight and have applebloom worried about scootaloo while sweetiebell is concerned for spike and you can have him shift back to his normal size and color but change his eyes to look like his instinct form and after those three get scotaloo to the hospital just make spike snappier more aggressive and sarcastic to everyone especially the mane 6 but other than that....I got nothing
2657558 thats pretty good also spike is still his normal size just partially shadow form btw you want to become a profreader
So I like this
2657741 yeah that's pretty good I like it I noticed a few canalization errors when you start new sentences it should be capd like He instead of he or for Applebloom but since I'm on a phone and dealing with school I don't think I could help out that much sorry
2657741 and also if you need help seeing errors after you post a chapter on here the comments will be full of people trying to help by pointing out errors better than I can so if you wouldn't mind looking through comments a day or do after posting you'll find a lot of help