Twilight slumped back on her throne in Canterlot Palace. “You know, Spike,” she said, “this isn’t really what I thought ruling Equestria would be like.”
“Oh yeah?” He glanced down at the schedule in his talons. “Your next appointment is in five minutes, by the way.”
Getting my story and Chapter 4 done-over by a proper proofreader. Astounded that anyone liked my stories at all, given the number of errors here. Still, this should improve the quality of future chapters considerably. Thanks, Ponychan!
Say, if someone were to give you a list of dozens of typos found in "I Forgot I Was There", what would you do?
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Thank them.
With minimal amounts of suicide to cleanse the dishonor. Minimal.