Revision · 10:56am Aug 5th, 2014
Hay there, readers!
I have returned from Galacon now and since my head is no longer feeling like someone is slamming a hammer on it, I feel like writing a bit.Also on future chapters, but mainly revising the story thus far.
I have read all the comments and lately I saw some complaints about certain aspects (mainly the entire Steve/Sarah scene of the latest chapter, but some others as well). With that being pointed out I sat down and thought about all this for a while and have to agree that I often had very questionable explanations, if there were any at all.
I already began adding a few more details into the last chapter, but due to lack of time until now it was not very much. But now that I have holidays for a while that will be picked up again and I will make a slight rewrite of the whole story this far.
I will not change any plot points, I mainly will give more details to make things seem more reasonable and realistic. I feel like I could have done better in a lot of places, and that you deserve to have read something better there. For that I am sorry, but I hope to improve it.
I don't know how long that progress will take, I will start from beginning and go all the way up to where we are now, but I noticed that the story isn't that short anymore. So it will be finished soon-ish™
-Gron
Could you give us a ballpark on soon-ish?
2345178 I don't now. I'll have to finish a bit of translation, but I'm almost done and then I'll go right at chapter 1
2345181 Fair enough.