One's Responsibilities · 6:40pm Aug 4th, 2014
Okay, so at about the time I wrote ch. 6 I was feeling rather apprehensive about a chapter that was fast approaching. It involved one of our heroins, but that was the only main character. However, the scene is important, so I decided to leave it in the shadows of ch. 8 for a reason. I wasn't comfortable writing it though. In fact, I was starting to be uncomfortable with simply how I had structured the story and the shape it had taken. Therefore, I let my brother go full force editor on my concept.
Afterwords, I achieved a mix of what started the story (A simple, yet weird, clopomedy involving legacy problems) and what it was becoming (A full on war between brothers with the Mane 6 merely there) and tied it all together and put a bow on it. Will it still be dark? Hell's yes. Did I change anything within any of the published chapters? No.
However, because of this the story is to lean more on its romance side (as you may have noticed) instead of its dark. And I never liked the name anyways. SO I was wondering if anyone had suggestions for a new name, because the current one bothers me. My suggestion for a new name is the title of this blog, but I do want your own feedback on it.
Anyways, I'll see you soon when I post my decision (hopefully with your help) on the name, and I promise more clop is coming soon. In ch. 10. What the hell is wrong with me?
Well for one, you hang out with me every Wednesday. I'm sure if we wanted to, though, we could make a list