Chapter 34 is written, BUT... · 3:19am Jul 24th, 2014
... I am not at all satisfied with it. It's been a tremendous pain to write so far, and as I think it over, I think it's because I'm trying to write the chapter in a way that just doesn't follow naturally from the events of the story. I had an idea of what I was going to do here, but the way the plotline and characters developed, I just can't leave it like I've written it. I don't know what it is that made it so aggravating to write (it's not like some of the other heavily emotional chapters), but I really don't think I can leave it as it is. Right now, I'm torn between wanting to just do some (heavy) editing, or dumping most of what I have so far and starting over.
In the former case, the chapter would probably be done faster, but it would be aggravating to modify it so heavily and even then there's no guarantee of it being very good. In the latter, it would probably take me a bit longer, but it would probably be better quality and honestly it would be easier for me to write it from scratch rather than try to salvage what I currently have. I haven't made any real decision yet, but I will by tomorrow. I need to sleep on it.
Also, disclaimer: I'm going on vacation starting on Saturday, so I don't know if I'll get any writing done in the next week anyway. The chapter will get done one way or another, but life has been hectic and I haven't been able to focus.
And now for something completely different:
Ok I know this one, but it's six full chapters in my case. I say scrap it and start again, it's not only easier, but it's the most sensible thing to do. That's the best way at the moment.
Start again, quality over quantity! I can wait and it will be easier on you. I get annoyed with stories that seen to get smudged at the end. Either way enjoy your vacation!
At least you aren't me who takes a month just to start to write a chapter.
I say but it to some heavy editing, if the quality is going to be good it is worth the wait.
~Tobben
I have to agree with the others if you feel starting from scratch will be the best way to go forward with the chapter do so. No point in dealing with a draft you are not pleased with.
It's okay. I get paranoid about upsetting my readers with long waits, but I realize that I'm incredibly patient when it comes to letting other authors put out good material after long stretches of time. And I'll admit that I think sometimes their work shows more quality over time than mine (yours included!).
Take your time. Quality > quantity.
*Offers Mr. Smashy, the story-demolishing aid*
Remember, only use as directed. I'd say pick the chunk you hate the worse, take Mr. Smashy to it, and try to rework it. If it doesn't go well, start over. And please bring my hammer back. I need it.