Chapters 1 & 2 (important) · 1:09am Jul 21st, 2014
You might have noticed that chapter 2 is now 2300 words longer than it used to be.
Yeah.
I've just finished cleaning it up, making it more in line with what I've been putting out since chapter 3. Chapter 1 has received a similar treatment, but it didn't need as much work or hole-filling as chapter 2.
Now both chapters look nicer, and chapter 2 especially has more information to sink your teeth into. If you want an idea of Wisp's cutie mark story, it's here.
If you're pressed for time or something, just reread chapter 2 (if you care enough to do so to begin with). I think chapter 1 bears rereading too, but it's not nearly as different as chapter 2 is.
P.S.: Now I can get back to chapter 9 until I come across another rut. Whoo!