Update: Aftermath of a Fallen Star (Maud)

Yes, it's late, but I thought I'd alert anyway

Comments

[Vic Fontaine]

Dude, that was a great update too! Maud was totally in character, and I think the structure of the chapter reflected that nicely as well. Of course, the plot twist here with the Pie family opens a whole new door in the narrative - one that I hope you'll revisit in later chapters.

Nicely done!

[Aatxe360]

So, you've decided to add a plot to it? I'm not sure how I feel about this. Still needs some Applejack.

[Vic Fontaine]

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Fwiw, I'm not sure if I see a full mini-arc brewing here. (Though that is clearly up to the author to decide)

I could be dead wrong here, but I see perhaps an entry from Pinkie Pie at some point in the future that catches the reader up to the results of her and Maud's investigation, and what (if any) ripple effect that had on the two of them, and/or the Pie family in general.

Just my hunch, lol.