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Jun
20th
2014

who wants to see if your OC will survive a slasher flick? · 2:38am Jun 20th, 2014

Eight ponies meet at an old building for different reasons. Virgin, criminal, slut, cop, drug addict, pretty face, jock, ex-military. When a pony dies, they try to survive to find the killer. One of the eight is the killer, but who is the killer? Why have I already planned out each of the eights fate? Why did I ask for OC's that ain't mine, but tell the writer's to pick to see if their OC survives? Why am I even asking these questions?

So if you what your OC as one of the characters, pick which of the eight slots and send me a pic. I'm not saying who dies and who the killer is, so don't ask.

Virgin(must be female)-IrresponsibleCupid's OC Glacial Strings.

criminal(must be male)-DJSkywalker726's OC Winter Dusk.

slut(must be female)-RainbowLighin's OC Storm Runner.

cop-RainbowLighin's OC Cover Tracks.

drug addict-Fonypan's OC Brittle Sticks.

pretty face(I don't care if it is a mare or a stallion)-RainbowLighin's OC Vira.

jock-
ex-military-Rainbowdash78's OC Storm Shadow.

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Oh no... Trick sounds like a survivor. Make sure you don't pick OP OC's press start. Pick your OCs wisely...:pinkiecrazy:

Brittle Sticks: Forest green pegasus mare who is highly tomboyish and has brittle bones disease. :pinkiecrazy:

She also wears a black fedora. And needs glasses to see.

2220494 she said to send a pic of ur oc

2220511 Well, I haven't made a pic.

Cop
Gender- stallion
Race- earth pony
Name- Sherrif Silver Bullet
Fur- silver
Mane- black
Cutiemark- a bullet

2220491 thanks, he shall be it.

2220511 I'm male...

2220513 I'll be needing a pick and I need to know which one you like your OC to be.

2220515 thank you, I appreciate it.

2220557 do you have a pic?

I'm calling the virgin being the killer.

2220616 okay, I'll what a week for it, just hope that no one else picks it and sends a pic.

2220631 Oh? Are you certain? Why do you think that the Virgin is the killer?

Glacial Strings, virgin. Pic:
fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/099/a/7/new_oc__glacial_strings_by_hothead112-d7dtt7n.png

EDIT: Yes, she's an alicorn, but she's not as strong as most alicorns.

2220657 It's always the last one you expect.

Also, is a pic required for OC submission?

2220744 I'd prefer it. No it isn't, but if you want me to absolute the character, I need a pic, the name, and which one it of the choices that isn't taken. If all I have is the description and which character it'll be, then it'll be held there until for a week. Then I'll ask one last time in another blog if all the slots are not taken or on hold. If no reply on the next three days for the character choice that is on hold, then I go with the description.

Does this answer your question?

2220726 I thank you and this OC will be in the story.

2220737 thank you, I'll absolute this OC for the story.

2220872 glad that you are happy:twilightsmile:

2220600 Brittle Sticks: Tomboy, has brittle bone disease, and is practically blind without glasses. Put her in any place you feel best.


fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/170/b/c/brittle_sticks_by_fonypan-d7n4y93.png

2220881 jock wouldn't make sense, I doubt she could be the slut. Would you rather she was the cop or the drug addict?

2220887 Uhh... how about the uhh... random lesbian? I have no idea...

2220900 I'll flip a coin on this one.

2220900 cop, Brittle Sticks will be the cop.

2220909 Interesting. :ajsmug:

2220913 you rather she be the drug addict, the slut, or the jock? I can change it, but I'll need to know now if you don't want her to be the cop. Frankly I rather you choose, so please tell me now.

2220924 I really don't care, but if any go druggy, but she only smokes pot.

2220926 very well, I'm going druggy.

2220863 It will do. Also, here is my submission:

Name: Hard Broiled
Occupation: Cop
Necessary physical description: A male earth pony with a light brown coat and dark brown mane. Eyes are blue. Cutie mark is a badge in a simmering pot of water. Or something poetic.
Personality Quirks: Takes the whole 'Hard Boiled Detective' thing far too seriously, and is super twitchy most of the time. Can cook, but anything more advanced than macaroni and sandwiches does not end well. Monologues, often out loud. Carries a gun, but seems really hesitant about using it.

And there he is. And if you choose my OC or not, I implore you to include this line: "What about the business of that little girl?"

2220949 nice, I'm accept him as the cop.

2220954 OC picture was send in for the cop, sorry.

Oh and I love the way that you designed that OC. Maybe someday I'll ask for your permission to use him.

2221007 worry the druggy is taken. I just didn't put it up yet. The slut and the jock are left.

2221358 Sad face.:fluttershysad:

But ego stroking does make me feel better.:raritywink:

And again, I insist that you use the line: "What about the business of that little girl?"

Still calling the virgin as the killer.

2221370 okay, I'll find a way to use that line.

2221382 I'm glad that you are excited

2221384 Okay, I'm sorry for this but: *VIRGIN

And now here's my analysis: The criminal, unless a serial killer which would likely be obvious, isn't the killer because s/he's likely just a petty criminal and the first one to be suspected when the bodies start dropping.

The cop and the ex-military could be the killer, going off the idea of a crusade to punish those that did something horrible. But that's been done too often to be surprising.

Why the hell would a jock go around murdering ponies? Especially if one was a cop?

The drug addict seems plausible because they are likely unstable and might not even realize what they're doing.

The slut always dies. Always

The pretty face might have some bit about murder keeping her beautiful, but the Bloody Baroness did it better.

And so, we come to our stereotypical and cliche goodie two shoes virgin. Quick note: I love cliches, but I'm making a point so bear with me. She's obviously going to be the final girl, forced to fight the killer on her own and escape by the skin of her teeth.

Unless of course she orchestrated the murders form the beginning. Because when you find somebody hanging from their ankles with their fingers sawed off and all their teeth pulled out, who are you going to suspect?

2221420 true, but any of them are the the killer. So in a way, every character is a plausible killer. It all matters on the reason way.

2221446 You lured seven other living, breathing, thinking beings to an old, broken down building in the dead of night, during a rainstorm, to murder them one by one.



Yeah, I'm going to say Reason may be on break during this.

2221453 all eight has the same invitation.

2221465 So the killer is a third party?

2221518 the killer made one for him/herself as well, so no one will know who the killer is.

I have to have a picture of Trick don't i?

2222063 idk, but the only spots left is the slut and the jock.

2222019 Have you played The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion?

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