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Mister Citadel


I look at MLP a bit differently than the average Brony. I don't usually read into things to come up with ships. I keep in mind that the show was made for families (well, mostly: I do write clop).

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  • 488 weeks
    Terrible Idea, abandon ship.

    Indeed it was. This account is once again dead, soz to everyone involved.

    9 comments · 931 views
  • 488 weeks
    Q/A

    Because of the return of the account, I am pleased to announce a Q/A today. Please, post any and all questions you have in the comments below by the end of the day, and I will attempt to answer as many as I can. Thank you, and I look forward to any and all questions.
    ~GS

    19 comments · 443 views
  • 488 weeks
    A statement from the actual Dolphy

    I'm Dolphy Blue Drake. There are now four members of this account, including myself. We were working on a project, but though I insisted that it be published to a different account than this one, we weren't going to get anywhere until I caved and surrendered the use of the account. I regret reopening this account, and I have a bad feeling about this, but I have little choice in the matter. I

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    5 comments · 557 views
  • 488 weeks
    A return

    Ladies and gentlemen, I am pleased to announce Citadel's return. New things are in store, and he does hope you enjoy them (And no, it's not Mystquestria)
    More details to follow. ~GS

    17 comments · 791 views
  • 506 weeks
    End of the line

    Well, after talking things over with my editors, I've come to realize that I've bitten off way more than I can chew with Mystquestria, not to mention the feelings I've hurt. Suffice it to say, I'm done on this account. I'm changing the login info so that Steven won't be able to use it, either. So, this is goodbye. Sorry for all the hurt I've caused. I'm returning to my original

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    51 comments · 1,491 views
Apr
20th
2014

Editors needed! · 6:26pm Apr 20th, 2014

I know that my story, The mare Who Wants A Human Child has made it into the featured box and all that, but many of the comments on the story have pointed out that the story needs to be rewritten from the ground up. I need help with the two chapters I've already posted, so I'm asking for editors to help me to save my fic from crashing and burning in the future. I need to improve the flow of it to make the story read more naturally, and I need to word certain things to help explain concepts better. If anyone is willing to lend me a helping hand/hoof, please let me know. Thank you.

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Comments ( 7 )

You need an editor? I think I can help. Look at my stories and see if I qualify. I'm Prince Flare, here to help.:derpytongue2:

If you need, I would be glad to help.

If you need an editor, I'd be glad to help. I'm already editing others' stories and have my own if you want to look at them. PM me if you're interested.

I could be a lot of help, with the fact that my mom is near perfect with grammar and one of my sisters has already published a book, I don't mean to brag or anything... but yeah, read tons of stories and books and everything... meh:facehoof: XD:derpytongue2:

I volunteer to help you. I know how many say it needs a full edit and I know how hard it can feel when you're this far into a story and people criticize the base but it's best to do before it gets longer. I write my own stories like Sombra's Redemption and The Sound of a Heartbeat as well as other things (not on this site) so I do have experience.

2034281 I'll contact you with a PM sometime this afternoon (it's a little past midnight where I am). i have a little test that I put every new editor through, and I'm sure you'll pass with flying colors. I'll send you the details then.

Sure thing, but also should I pass, if at any point you feel like I overstep my bounds please let me know, a lot of people I know can be either very flexible with what they right or very rigid and I don't know your personal flexibility with stories when it comes to editing

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