What am I doing wrong? · 10:05am Mar 16th, 2014
I'm reaching the sixth chapter of my story about Ben but I feel as if you don't like it. What is it you don't like? His character? The story? Tell me, I can take criticism.
In other note I will put Project Haven on Hiatus since I have lost the energy to make it.
New story might be up... maybe.
You probably need an editor.
The English usage in it is just enough that it's not funny bad and it's not easy to read. It's too far off the deep end to be comical, and definitely isn't up to par for the serious story you're trying to write. Basically, you need someone to come through and seriously overhaul your story.
If only I weren't extremely busy all the time.![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
1931207 Can you recommend someone?
1931215![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
This group should be able to help.
1931239 Thank you. Now to hope for the best...