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Mar
4th
2014

Ponioh update · 7:46am Mar 4th, 2014

Hey everypony. F1 here. My apologies for the lack of updated chapters. My computer crashed and I lost all of my update work. I'm currently working on both chapter 13 and 14. I hope to upload the chapters soon (currently writing them on my phone). Many thanks to all who've been patient with me (especially you The Notebook:ajsmug:). As a treat, I'll give you snippets from both chapters.

Chapter 13:

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Back at the duel, Mere Ka continued with her turn.
"I summon 'Ancient Gear Soldier' in Attack Mode."

Ancient Gear Soldier
ATT: EARTH
Level: 4 stars
Type: Machine/Effect
Card Text: If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards until the
end of the Damage Step.
ATK/DEF: 1300/1300

A pale-brown mechanized soldier emerged onto the field. As it's visible gears turned, it began to clasps it's turret hand.
"And thanks to your Field Spell, he gain 500 ATK."
Ancient Gear Soldier's ATK is increased to 1800.
"He's still too weak to defeat my wolf," stated Fluttershy.
"I know that all too well , 'Shy. That's why I'm equipping it with the 'Axe of Despair'!" said Mere Ka.

Axe of Despair
ATT: SPELL
Type: Equip Spell Card
Card description: The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can tribute 1 monster on the field to return this card to the top of the Deck.

In it's a hand appeared a large black axe with a red gem at the center of the blade.
"And thanks to this his ATK increase by 1000," she said, with a smirk.
Ancient Gear Soldier's ATK is increased to 2800.
"Uh-oh..." Fluttershy groaned.
"Next, I switch 'Golem King - Earth' to Attack Mode."
The murky golem then switched to an attack position.
"Now, 'Ancient Gear Soldier'. Attack her wolf with Slash of Despair!" ordered Mere Ka.
The mechanized soldier then launched a crimson slash the opposing wolf.
"Not so fast, I activate-"
"So, sorry 'Shy. But when my monster attacks you can't activate any Spell or Trap cards," Mere
Ka explained.
"What?"
The crimson slash then destroyed her precious wolf. The small shockwave from the destruction grazes Fluttershy and her Life Points were reduced 3700.
"Next up is 'Golem King - Earth'. Attack her directly with Wasteland Rush!"
The murky golem the struck the ground which caused muddy spires rocket toward the timid pegasus.
"Not this time, Mere Ka. I activate the trap card 'Enchanted Javelin'!"

Enchanted Javelin
ATT: TRAP
Type: Trap Card
Card: Increase your Life Points by the ATK of 1 opponent's attacking monster.

An ancient javelin appear in front of Fluttershy.
"Thanks to this card I gain life equal to your monster's ATK," she explained.
"Yeah, but you still take the brunt of the attack," countered Mere Ka.
Fluttershy is then hit the the barrage of spires. The force of impact sent Fluttershy crashing to the ground. As she gingerly got to her feet, Mere Ka couldn't help but laugh at her display.
"I just don't see what Star sees in you. You're not strong, you scare easily, and you barely pose any kinda of threat," she mocked. "So, why choose you when can have me?"
As she rose to her hooves, Fluttershy couldn't help but notice that the last part had a bit of venom in it.
If I didn't know any better, I'd say she's jealous of me and Star's relationship...
Her thoughts were confirmed, as she saw the bitter scowl on Mere Ka's face.
"What makes you so special?" she hissed.
"Nothing..." Fluttershy simply answered.
"What?"
"Nothing makes me special. I sometimes wonder why he care for me as much as he does,"
Fluttershy began. "Ever since we were foals, he'd always be there for me. To help me out when
then got tough."
Mere Ka was then shock when she saw the determined look on her face.
"An that's why you can't have my Star."
Mere Ka felt smirk appear on her face.
"He won't be yours for long," she teased. "Anyways, that ends my turn."

Chapter 14:

I gotta hold on! I give up here, it'll make everything I worked for all for nothing.
At moment that, Star's pendant began to fluctuate rapidly and a bright light then engulfed Star Driver.

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Star then found himself it a archaic room filled ancient writing all over the walls.
What going on?! Where am I? he asked
As Star inspected the strange room, a hooded figure emerged from the shadows.
Greetings, Star Driver... spoke the figure.
What the...? Who are you?
I'm the spirit that resides in your Millennium Pendant spoke the figure, as he pointed to the pendant around Star's neck.
Star then looked down at his Millennium Pendant.
You what? Mom never told about some spirit living in my pendant. said Star, a little confused.
I doubt she knew about. But that's not why I'm here. chuckled the figured.
Why are you here?
I'm here to offer my assistance he explained.
Assistance?
Yes. I sense you are weak from your previous encounter, and I came to offer to assist you with your duel.
How so? Star asked, a little skeptical.
By combining our spirits together, I'll be able to heal you as well as give you guidance with dueling. answered the figure.
And why should I trust you? Star asked, a little hesistant.
The figure then lifted his hood to reveal his face. Star couldn't believe his eyes. The figure
looked exactly like Star, just slightly older.
I'm not saying you should trust me. I'm only asking you to let me help.
Who are you? asked Star.
I've forgotten my true name, but you can call me 'Moon', he said, extending his hand.
He didn't know why, but Star felt as though he could trust the spirit.
Nice to meet you, Moon, said Star, as he shook his hand.
So will you let me lend you my strenght? asked Moon.
Sure, what have got to lose? shrugged Star.
Very well...
With that, Moon then transformed into a ball of light. Before he knew, the ball of light entered into Star's body. He then felt a rush of energy surge throughout his body.
This is...I've never felt anything like this...
Once again, the Millennium Pendant began to glow and oscillate rapidly.
"PONIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!"

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As the light faded, Rainbow noticed that Star appearance had change. His mane was a lot more spiky than before with a long bang between his eyes. His eyes now had a sharp edge to them.
What the hay happened? she thought.
Pegasus looked in awe, as he saw the once weakened pegasus now full of energy.
Inconcievable! How could he still have the strength to continue?! he seethed.
He then turned his attention to the Duel Field.
"Are you two ready?"
"You know it," Rainbow said with a smirk.
"I'm always ready..." said Star, with a confident grin.
Even his voice is different...
"Then let the match begin!" Pegasus said, as he left the stage.
"I don't mean to be rude Dash, but I'll start things off," Star said, as he drew his card.
As he looked at he card he proceeded with his turn.
"Alright, it's time to shine!

Once again, thanks for being patient

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