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Drefsab


I'm a guy who gets bored at work and writes about ponies. Sometimes it's clop, sometimes it's action and adventure. Hopefully I'm not terrible at it. Rarity is best pone.

  • MJust Before the Dawn
    In a time shortly after Luna's banishment, Celestia finds herself on the brink of war with a rival nation. Hoping to avert disaster, she seeks out someone very special: Tercio Krosus. A soldier, a confidant, and the only living human in Equestria.
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  • 334 weeks
    Spoilers: I'm not dead

    So this has been a fun week.

    In my last post I said I was being kept in the hospital to monitor my heart for some unknown abnormality, in addition to a possibly broken foot due to passing out thanks to severe dehydration from a particularly nasty flu.

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  • 335 weeks
    Guess who's stuck in a hospital bed. That's right, this guy.

    Hey everyone. So for the last week I've been away from a computer, first for Thanksgiving with family, and more recently due to a severe flu caught from said family. I'll spare you the details, but it was a messy affair for a couple of days.

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  • 346 weeks
    Punk Rarity is the best thing I've ever seen.

    You guys. You guys.

    It's too good. I can only waifu out so hard. Just look at it.

    My reaction exactly, Dash. We need more punk ponies!

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  • 360 weeks
    I'm old and I hate change, or: the site update.

    Welp.

    Fimfiction rolled out a new site update, and it has fucked up my formatting. For one thing, all previous paragraphs are now spaced out by a line. While this is fine for typical internet reading, I specifically made the formatting look like a book, ie with actual blank lines only between sections of the chapter.

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  • 361 weeks
    Just when I thought Rarity couldn't get any better, she goes and does this.

    HOLY FUCKING SHIT. YOU GUYS. SERIOUSLY.

    I CAN'T TAKE IT, IT'S TOO GOOD. THERE IS TOO MUCH WIN FOR ONE WAIFU.

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Jan
30th
2014

Well whataya know, sex really does sell (Also a thank-you) · 12:07pm Jan 30th, 2014

First of all, hey, 100 blog posts! That's 100 posts of me inflating my own ego and/or felating myself over how awesome I am. So, uh, hooray? Let us celebrate with one of the best songs ever recorded. Coincidentally, I may have listened to that song for an hour straight last night just imagining epic pony battles for use in future chapters. IF ONLY I COULD ANIMATE.

Anyway, it's been about four days since I posted the first chapter of Just Before the Dawn, and I gotta say, the reception has been overwhelming positive. Just to give you some idea, the current stats for JBtD are:
-870 views
-206 likes
-15 dislikes
-342 (!) favorites

And that's just for one chapter! Crazy. Pretty sure it took me several months to get that much with S&B. One of the perks of being featured, eh? Though I'd be remiss (and I have to use the word 'remiss' once in a while or my head explodes) if I didn't mention that those 15 dislikes irk me. I realize that the vast majority of them are from people who downvoted the story based purely on the concept and/or genre, and those people are childish assholes, but that's still just short of half of all the dislikes S&B got for thirty dang chapters. Hopefully the dicks who jumped on the "RAAAAGH HUMAN IN EQUESTRIA RAGE RAGE RAGE" train are done, and the rest of you can enjoy things in peace.

Speaking of you fine people who did support my story, I would like to thank you for the overwhelmingly positive feedback I've received. This is a story I've had the backburner for a good while now, and I'm very glad that it's resonated with many of you. I've been typing like a madman over the last two days, and truth be told I could post the next chapter RIGHT NOW if I wanted to, but I feel like I could still add more to improve it before release. I might just post it tomorrow night, since the things I want to add are relatively minor, just a paragraph or two.
The one concern that I saw pop up frequently was that it wasn't very clear that Tercio is, indeed, our human character. While I did leave it deliberately vague for the purpose of filling in his character later, I might have been too vague. I'll likely pull up the chapter and see what I can add to make things more clear without breaking the flow or info-dumping. We'll see.

Finally, as the post title says: sex sells. Let's compare 4 days of JBtD with the entire release of my other story, Red Sky, shall we?

Total time since release --
JBtD: 4 days
Red Sky: 4 months

Word Count --
JBtD: 5,932
Red Sky: 39,498

Unique Views --
JBtD: 870
Red Sky: 291

Ratings --
JBtD: 206 up, 15 down
Red Sky: 47 up, 1 down

Favorites:
JBtD: 342
Red Sky: 41

Guess which story has the "sex" tag? The people know what they want, and what they want is some human-on-pony lovin'. I would certainly not refute that. I totally don't have a Rarity toy, and I don't speak with it when I'm lonely.

SHUT UP I'M NOT OBSESSED.

So, yeah, thanks to everyone who has read and enjoyed the first chapter of my story. I hope you stick around, because I have big plans for my little Celestia romance/war fic, and I've been driven to write this story faster than I've felt since the hayday of S&B. See you in a day or two for the next chapter!

-Dref

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Comments ( 6 )

Hey, no shame about the Rarity thing, brother. Glad to see the new story is so popular. If you ever need another set of eyes on, editing or prereading, I'd be honored to help out.

Though I'd be remiss (and I have to use the word 'remiss' once in a while or my head explodes)

Good lord, it's contagious. What have I done?!

Hopefully the dicks who jumped on the "RAAAAGH HUMAN IN EQUESTRIA RAGE RAGE RAGE" train are done, and the rest of you can enjoy things in peace.

Eh, it was something 90:10 likes to dislikes at one point, so at least it seems to be improving. Still a bunch of dicks though.

It bugs the hell out of me when I see it on other people's works. As for the person who downvoted one of my youtube videos, it really pissed me off. Just tell me why damnit!

Nothing wrong with being obsessed. I certainly am and it has got to the point that I am planning to build a device that will create a portal to the Equestria. Now that I have the plan I only need to build the machine and for that I'll need to study physics so the hardest part is behind, right? :pinkiecrazy:

But seriously I would not to let the downvotes bother since there are just few probably given by people who did so for the reason you mentioned on the blog. Why let something bother that you can't affect anyway. :twilightsmile: Actually why I am never gonna write a story is just because I would die at the second when I get first dislike plus I would need one helluva proofreader.

Loved your new story Dref, don't worry about the people who wanna hate your story.

Yeah, I know I've had a share of dislikes on my story based purely on the genre. Normally such things don't bother me, but the fact that most of those dislikes likely come from folks who didn't even bother to read the story in the first place... yeah. Anyway, I'm curious to see where you go with this thing!

Sex? Nope, read it for plot. Srly!

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