Eternal Chapter 3 and status on Chapter 4

Okay so I thought you guys might enjoy/benefit from some commentary that explains a few details about the last chapter numbero 3.

First off: Cloud why didn't anyone alert the doctors when Spike woke up?

Excellent question! It's simple really men are idiots (I include myself in that). You see as long as were conscious and not in pain we assume were fine. And Spike had other things on his mind (and his chest) he considered more important then a bunch of doctors fawning over him.

Second: Why didn't anyone else enter the room, Doctors, Nurses, or the other 4 girls you mentioned were checking up on the two of them?

First off the Doctors and nurses are afraid of Spike. Its not that they think he's normally dangerous, but they don't wanna be in a room with him when he wakes up confused, disoriented, and possibly out for blood he is still a dragon after all. They assumed one of his constant visitors would tell them, but they'd be wrong. Now as for the girls Twilight sent them away or she simply sent them a message through what ever means you guys come up with magic, Derpy, or other. I don't care.

Third: Twilight was instrumental in this chapter why isn't she a character tag?

I'll admit she is quite important in this chapter and at fault for a decent chunk of the fluff. That being said, the story isn't about her just because she was necessary for forwarding the story it doesn't make her a main character. I have no interest in having people click my story thinking it might be some kinda love triangle, or Spike ditches Rarity for Twilight, or so on and so forth. She'll have appearances, albeit extremely rare, and so will the other girls.

Fourth: Did you just make the diamond dogs not evil?

Yes, yes i did. It strikes me that working as a team would be a hell of a lot more productive for both groups so that's what I wrote. Its also a very minor detail that voids me having to make Ponyville on a fault line.

Five: How come Spike has all this self doubt about Rarity even though he was joking about winning her heart by saving her earlier? Also, how come he doesn't seem to go into that in detail once he wakes her?

Spike loves Rarity for who she is. Spike wants Rarity to love him for who he is not for the one moment where he saved her. This is known as the Louis Lane effect; basically Louis loves Superman cause he keeps saving her but she doesn't really know anything about the man under the hero. Now for the second part their; Spike is a man and were all idiots (you know its true). Rarity basically manages to calm his doubt with her little confession about her gift to him; she was in love with him before the accident. Now she may be more cemented in her choice because of the accident but he did save her life what would you expect. Plus that rather innocent natured kiss made his mind and doubt melt away. Ya not every kiss has to be a make out session people; you can have a normal kiss go on for a extended period of time. There was a lot of fluff in this chapter.

Six: When will the next Chapter come out?

Well I don't really know to be honest. I want to start writing my second fic this week. Which means i got hash out the details and get the first chapter done. That being said I'm still hoping to get the next chapter of Eternal out next weekend, time allowed. It should not take more then 2 weeks at most however.

Seven: I hear new fic, tell us more!

Spike and his Six Lovely Ladies (Title may be changed), this ones gonna be a Clopfic involving Spike and the mane 6. It should be noted this one ends up with a legitimate Harem all 6 being fully aware and accepting of the others (and bisexual at least by the end of it). It will be romantic (AKA Spike will not just be randomly sleeping around with everyone, not that that's not fun but I like this idea vastly more).

I'm still looking for editors or proofreaders for both stories

Now all that being said if you guys wanna ask any other question you feel were unanswered go for it. I will not answer questions I intend to dive into in future chapters, AKA no spoilers! The 1st and 5th question will most likely get brought up in the next chapter to a extent.