Jan
26th
2014
It's happening, ladies and gentlemen. · 12:44am Jan 26th, 2014
I am submitting the new story as soon as I give it an editing pass. When you see that the old story, A Cup of Chamomile no longer exists, then that means the new story has been submitted and is on its way.
I can't know for sure for sure, but I'm pretty sure y'all are gonna like it quite a bit. It's just under 13000 words total, and while it's my first ever attempt at writing sex in a story, I don't think it's too shabby. I had to peruse around and read a ton of clopfics and stuff to get a feel for what I was doing since I've never done it before, but hopefully I still managed to do a good job.
Peace out, y'all!
Did you break it into chapters? It helps if you don't just slam a huge 13k wall of text at the reader. I usually go with a max 10k words per chapter, so maybe cut it in half?
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Point taken. I'll see if I can break it up into places where it's not super lopsided or doesn't make sense.
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Aaand, done. First 2500 words or so in the first chapter with the rest in the second.
Thanks for the suggestion, man. I wasn't thinking too well... again.