What love... re-write. · 8:08pm Jan 22nd, 2014
Ok, so I have officially decided to completely rewrite my biggest story. Don't worry, it will remain the same over-all and nothing will change other than the grammatical errors and inconsistencies. However, in order for me to fix all of the inconsistencies in the story. (IE: parts in which I have forgotten to write about or have misjudged later on.) I am going to need my fans to help me out. Due to the storys length, it would take me avery long time to completely rewrite it all if I had to read it all over again. Which I'm going to have to do regardless considering my skills have vastly improved since I began writing.
So, this is a calling for anyone willing to send me a PM with the inconsistencies of my story. I need to add stuff and remove stuff from the story.
One final note. I AM REMOVING ALL CLOP FROM THE STORY.
Yes, I have decided to remove all the clop from the story but leave the gore in it. The sexual innuendos will remain, as well as the perverse thoughts and such, but the clop will be removed. I am no longer interested in writing clop as I have too many friends that read my story and think im an utter perv for thinking naughty thoughts about ponies.
So. you guys have a chance to download the story as is for the time being. It will be altered as time permits, but the clop chapters will be rewritten to avoid the sexual material. This means that the chapters that are mostly clop will be a new addition to the story that follows along its original path. Mainly just filler material.
i was just about to reread the story.... i put it o the back burner at chap 137 and never got back to it.... huh welp lets see how this turn out.
They think you're a perv?
Not shameless advertising, but get them to take a look at this.
Then they will know what a pervert really is!
1747165 Put on my read later list when I'm not at work LOL. At least they're older and it isn't foalcon LOL
1747172 That's something I will never write. I may put in some suggestive things, as we all know kids get curious as they get older, such as;
He's just had sex explained to him by Twilight. This was in Canterlot throne room, in front of Princess Celestia. So yeah, any clop I write will have them (If it involves them) aged up to the minimum of 16, which is the legal age over here.
Also, if you spot any errors, please point them out. Anything prior to around chapter 22 was before I had an editor.
I know it's out of the blue, but will you ever get back to 'Coming to Terms with Reality', or is that story on permanent hiatus?
1747298 I'm currently writing a chapter on it, however it is slow going.
I am a bit disappointed that you are removing parts of your story just because a few of your friends think that you are a 'perv' for basically writing pony porn. I mean it is your story after all and you can do whatever you want with it but still though if a few people get butthurt cause of some smut they see then they need to just suck it up and deal with it. Trust me, if they think that what you have written down is perverted than they have obviously seen or played anything that Fenoxo has done. That is true perverted smut at its probably finest.
separate story for clop?
1748669 just an extension of the current story. Nothing to write home about.
1748237 true, but the friends I am refering to are my folks
1748839 Ah,so the family are complaining, now that is understandable...always the family that doesn't approve of what we do, that's why I just keep them in the dark about most things that they shouldn't be concerned about, like my internet history or the things I read....IE pony stories :3
1748839 i knew I should've read this story... sooner...
1748962 no worries. I'll have a copy of the unaltered version for DL after the rewrite
1747966
Good enough!
1748839 "true, but the friends I am refering to are my folks"
I'm gonna go grab it before it gets changed :P
1749794 lol, yea, my folks make a point to be a part of my life quite often. Which isn't really a bad thing considering all the hell ive gone through. They are great support and help when they can. The fact that we all work together makes things interesting as well.