Half way mark! · 1:22am Jan 22nd, 2014
To all you TMS fans out there reading this, or other viewers stumbled upon this, guess what? Xhoral1865 and I are at the half way mark of editing TMS 1. How exciting it that? Not only that, but we both got the massive beast TMS side story: Treasured Sweetheart edited too. What an accomplishment!
So yeah to those of you guys that have read TMS 1 before and haven't read it a second time, Prologue to Chapter 12 has all been edited and should sound better and make more sense. (I apologize for that one. 
Well I have been getting better while writing now, so no more jumping tenses.) Or you might be the new readers that discovered TMS 1 because of TMS 2. I'm sorry that you started reading then noticing the newly edited bits then suddenly read the messy chapters. Maybe you might have to read the newly edited chapters to get a better idea.
Now, I was planning on trying to get all the way to Chapter 20 by Saturday, but I took a lazy day today by playing Pokémon X and watching Touhou videos. (Wow, never played the game but I sure do love the anime and AMVs from Touhou! :3) 
I made that up by fixing the side story. That's like two or three chapters in one. Welp, I got it done and thought I would give you guys a progress report. I'm now going through Chapter 13 then I'll send it to my editor later for him to do his magic.
Until next time, stay tuned fellow readers!
Yup. Now I'm just waiting for more chapters to
TMS: Treasured Sweethearts took me a few days to edit 'cause it's long and I kept getting dsitracted. 
readedit.1744543 Oh that's fine, I knew that Treasured Sweetheart would take a little longer to edit than normal. Since it was long.