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  • 457 weeks
    IT BEGINS!

    THE NEW AGE OF PONY BALL HAS BEGUN!

    All comments on the original story have been deleted to remove all potential spoilers for new readers, and because many of them may become irrelevant with changes to various chapters to the story.

    Happy reading...

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  • 458 weeks
    Story Updates

    Hey guys, been a long time since I've posted anything, so just want to give you an update on progress. Then first chapter of Pony Ball Z is sitting at about 80% completion. It's one of the few that is getting a complete rewrite rather than just a little polish and touch up. It needed it since it was initially written while I had no idea what direction I was going to take the story at all. The

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  • 463 weeks
    Pony Ball Z Revision

    I'm honestly not sure if this tag is going to work. Dunno if favorites came back with the story when it was restored. Anyway...

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  • 464 weeks
    Time to Explain the Cryptic Message

    Alright guys. No more beating around the bush. Unless you like bush beating. In which case, carry on. Beat that bush like it's never been beaten before.

    As for me, I'm going to be very direct here: I'M TRYING TO BRING MY STORIES BACK

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Jan
18th
2014

Pony Ball GT will be continuing, but here something very important you need to know · 12:53pm Jan 18th, 2014

Yes, I have decided to continue writing Pony Ball GT. However, Fluttershy and Rarity's portion of the journey is getting removed for the remainder of the story. What has already been written shall stay, but the rest of their story is getting axed. Reason being, the rest of their adventure is going to be very, very boring.

As you've noticed, they've simply been added to the first story arc of Dragon Ball. While this same style will work for Applejack and Rainbow Dash, this is only so because they are taking a more direct role in those respective story arcs. Rarity and Fluttershy on the other hand, were going to be more like side characters that were only going to add a bit of comedic effect. While I think it worked in what they've been in so far, it certainly wasn't going to work in the next couple of chapters. I could count the number of jokes in the next chapter on one hand... and they really aren't that funny. Oolong and Pilaf were going to be introduced in this one, and then Yamucha in the next. Just know that their journey comes to an end at the same time as the dragon is first summoned. Instead of Oolong wishing for panties, we'd have Fluttershy wishing for her and Rarity to be sent home, and that would be the end of it.

This removal won't really have an impact on the overall story, as outside of their story they're only going to get a brief mention a couple of times, and this will only result in about four chapters being removed.

With that...

The next chapter will be a split one, focusing on two different perspectives. Equestria present, and Equestria past. The next chapter will set up for the next fight, and will give you guys a hint into the three's past. So, look forward to it.

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Comments ( 4 )

I still can't wait for you to use It Has To Be This Way from Metal Gear Rising, as a battle theme.

OH SWEET CELESTIA I LOVE YOU (no homo), but thanks for continuing and yeah Rarity and Fluttershy's little Journey wasn't that eventful compared to Rainbow Dash and Applejacks and I can wait to see a little bit about the three's past, and thank you Pony Vegeta for deciding to continue :D this story is AWESOME

Well, I can only say "happy writing"!
And I suppose "thank you for this" will also do.:raritywink:
Just don't force it! I suppose getting back after a longer break has its caveats.

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