Pony Ball Z Revision · 1:43pm Jun 16th, 2015
I'm honestly not sure if this tag is going to work. Dunno if favorites came back with the story when it was restored. Anyway...
For those reading this, you're not crazy. Pony Ball Z has returned! I've come back to try and finish what I started. I make no promises as to just how far the Pony Ball trilogy will go, but I'm going to try my hardest to go as far as I can. If you click on the story now, you'll notice there are currently no chapters listed at all. The reason is that I have unpublished all 27 chapters of the story, and all chapters of Pony Ball GT.
Why, you ask?
Because from start to finish, the story is a bloody mess. This was my first foray into fan fiction. And while the story itself was pretty solid, the presentation was not. Grammatical mistakes galore, characters not in character, extreme lack of detail in many areas, poor set up in many scenes, etc., etc.
I'm going back in from the very beginning and doing a massive clean up of the whole thing. I will republish chapters as I finish them. There will be no changes to the overarching story. So if you don't want to reread it, you don't have to. Just wait for me to get back to GT and you're kosher. I'm simply going in and fleshing everything out better, making it a more enjoyable reading experience.
Well, happy reading! And I hope to bring you all another fun experience! See you in the comments!
Thank you for bringing it back, it was one of my favorite DBZ crossovers.
Ain't this ambitious, how you going to keep up with this and your YouTube career at the same time? I don't even know.
3154056 Hence why I say I'm not going to make anymore promises. YouTube and Twitch come first. This comes second.
Nice, i loved your story, it was nice....exepte the whole killing everpony in bloody suffering agonizing pain but hey, at least they are back alive to experiment the traumatize of their death
It's funny how you say "happy reading" after bringing down all chapters from all stories.
Oh, and it seems the favourites stayed. Even went through the library update.
Though I think that republishing chapters will not register them as new. We'll see.
3156370 There is a bit of irony in that, isn't there? And it's good to know that despite not even existing, all of the favorites and such were still stored and survived all the site changes. I'll take a look at the 'updated stories' section on the main page when I republish the first chapter. If it doesn't show up then I'll know for sure. If it doesn't, then I'll just post a blog update tagged with the story to let everyone know another chapter has become available.