• Member Since 18th Jul, 2013
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ChromeMyriad


In a box under the stairs.

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  • 470 weeks
    My Opinion on 'Like a G5' by PresentPerfect

    Hello, everyone. This is my opinion/reaction to this story by this guy. If you don't know what's going on, read this.

    — Chapter 1—

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    7 comments · 627 views
  • 472 weeks
    My Opinion

    Hello, everyone.

    I've been gone from fimfic for a while now due to things that have nothing to do with MLP or fimfiction, and now I'm back. I'm writing again, though I won't say on what since that usually raises hopes that I tend to let down due to OCD and other personal inadequacies.

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    2 comments · 598 views
  • 488 weeks
    So this has been irksome for me...

    I've been ruminating on the community's response to Remedial Lessons for some time. While the story has been met with approval from nearly all who offered feedback, there were some comments that brought up portions of the story they didn't agree with. Specifically, the treatment of Twilight Sparkle and the nature of Luna's reaction to the guard's improper acts. I was excited to engage in

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    5 comments · 554 views
  • 509 weeks
    This One's About Me and Apologies to Followers

    As a rule, I find what I do lacking. Having wasted many hours pondering this quirk of my character, I've decided it's a good thing. To me, it's not a lack of confidence in my abilities, but a standard for myself that is persistently greater than what I am; it pushes me to improve rather than scale a cliff only to sit on a plateau.

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  • 510 weeks
    Morsels #3

    "This... how is this possible?" Twilight said. As the blaze of light faded, the creature began moving again. Its neck uncurled as it stood on thick, stubby legs.

    "Twilight," Rarity said, starting to back away from the beast, "why didn't the magic work?"

    Rainbow Dash landed next to Twilight. "Yeah, what gives? It worked just fine on Tirek."

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Dec
27th
2013

Call for Pre-Readers: Somber Heart · 8:40pm Dec 27th, 2013

Hello everyone. I've begun writing the first chapter of Somber Heart in earnest. As of writing this blog post, I have about 1,200 of I imagine about 5000-6000 words written. I want pre-readers and idea people for some first impressions and error checking. Please understand that the nature of the work will mean heavy spoilers and that you will probably read snippets and pieces of the first chapter rather than a coherent story. If you want to read the whole first chapter in one go with all of the bugs worked out, please do not apply to be a pre-reader. For those who are interested, just comment on this blog post and I will PM you when I have something ready to be pre-read. I'm gonna try to get it at least mostly completed before I message you so I don't completely ruin the story for you.

If for some reason you'd like to keep up with the story as it evolves step-by-step, I can arrange for you to read it as I revise and write it.

As a final note, I write in a somewhat sporadic fashion. I usually write the middle leading up to the climax first before I write the beginning, so keep that in mind.

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Comments ( 4 )

I may be able to help you out. What exactly are you looking for? :twilightsmile:

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I'm looking mainly for someone to read what I have at random points and say, 'This sounds weird' or 'Your wording here is confusing' or 'This makes the hero sound like an asshole.' I want to know where the story has hiccups so I can iron them out. I'm more concerned with a good story than a clean read.

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Excellent, you're on my list! :pinkiecrazy:

In a good way. :pinkiehappy:

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