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ColdGoldLazarus


Tired, But Trying (Taking Hope In G5)

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    Nopony was there to help her. She’d taken the shift alone, despite all the rumors. She’d dismissed them as pure nonsense – and now she was to pay for it with her life...
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Dec
23rd
2013

Maniacal: My Most Recent Brain-Vomit · 10:20pm Dec 23rd, 2013

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But hopefully it's enjoyable brain-vomit, as I put in some (some) effort to arrange it into something worth reading. I also hope I didn't end up giving too much sympathy for the devil, as I tried to avoid that here.

The story kind of evolved as I wrote it; I had the vaguest idea of someone breaking into the factory at the beginning, but the specifics about Spikeshoe Pinstripe came about right when he actually walked on the scene. I normally don't like this kind of seat-of-the-pants writing, to be honest, but in this case, I would say no real narrative harm was done, so it's excusable.

My interpretation of the Mane-Iac is thus like a combination of the Joker and Rahs-al-goul, to put this in Batman terms. And I suppose Spikeshoe's plot could be a possible origin story for one of the Power Ponies themselves - or another villain.

An actual review of the episode will come tomorrow or Wednesday, I think. Anyway, enjoy!

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