A Jewel of a Problem Chapter 9-Essentially done, need Pre-readers! (Or in other words, I'm desperate, HELP ME xD) · 9:13am Dec 20th, 2013
Chapter 9 is essentially done, I've got the ending set up and I'm pretty much out of ideas as of this particular moment as to what more I could add. However, I am not completely content with the chapter, and want some feedback before I declare it 100% complete.
Thusly, I'm sending out a call to all the fans of AJoaP, I am offering an opportunity to pre-read the next chapter and offer feedback, from just saying you think what I've got down is awesome to suggesting things I can rework or even add in to make the chapter better.
The first ten people to comment on this blog post will receive a message containing the link to the google doc that houses chapter 9. You will be able to comment on it and help get it closer to being released sometime before 2014.
I thank everyone for waiting so long, and I apologize profusely for not getting this done faster. I appreciate everyone who comments and favorites my story, you don't know how much it means to me that people actually think this story is awesome :p
I'm looking forward to anyone who is willing to lend a hand.
I would be glad to share my thoughts regarding the upcoming chapter.
I might be able to help(or at least try to help - english isn't my native language) but with the end of term being near, I would only have free time for that on this or on the next weekend. If there would be any other volunteers, I think they would be able to help more than I.
I'll take a look, but I'm sure it's not as bad as you think.
I'll gladly take a look over your work.
Oh, A read and comment on the contents eh.
I can do that, good writer rainbow.
O'er here! Able-bodied reader at your service. Accept Death's evenomed words of painful truth and end thy suffering!!
I'd be more than happy to help you out :D
That would be awesome. I love AJoaP anyway, so why the hell not?
Alright, so I'm a bit late because of com service, but I will gladly pre-read the next chapter for you! Also, my English teacher gave out extra credit for haikus about the final.
When did we learn this
Oh my god I'm going to fail
I'm so done with this
I could help.