Dec
7th
2013
twow Riffs: Spike's Futa Foursome · 8:54pm Dec 7th, 2013
So I’m sure it’s not a surprise that I’ve been around futa. Hell, my eighth riff was Futashy. Well, it’s been too long without a futa fic, so he’re one right here.
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This story is called Spike’s Futa Foursome, and if you can’t figure it out by the title, well, I don’t know how to help.
Let’s begin.
Read the full riff here!
(Leave comments, if you can actually finish the damn story.)
NSFW: Clop, futa, foalcon, excessive cum, purple prose and Futaloo.
Da hell's a purple prose?
1582195
It's like when you're being excessively descriptive and long-winded to paint a scene. Similar to "lavender unicorn syndrome".
1582215 Oh....that sounds dumb.
1582234
Sometimes it can be used effectively to create atmosphere, especially when describing natural scenery, but I really don't think it has much place in clop, personally.
1582251 D'uhhh
Would keep reading, but I was getting ready to vomit, and I haven't even had breakfast yet.
1582251 Especially when there's TOO DAMN MUCH.
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1582251
I like imagery with my writing. No one has complained about details before, in fact I often get requests to delve deeper. I suppose it's because when reading clopfics you take on a different mindset. You want a scene to unfold and be built for you. One that allows you to feel the emotions and sensory stimulation without much work on your part.
So yes, it's descriptive, it delves into scenes in heavy detail. I really don't plan on changing the form of this.
I know this is a riff, so people will be reading it with a different mindset (one that isn't erotically fueled), so there's that. There is a portion of a suspension of disbelief that is involved while reading these fics.
As for rules of clopfics, yeah that seems pretty standard, people like big things. Plus it's pretty hot from an erotic standpoint.
In the end, I'm fine with critiques of my work as long as they don't divulge into attacks. I'm fine with criticism.
If you don't like the way I write, that's fine. Everyone approaches literature differently.
1583815
For sure. No offense meant.
I only write romantic clop, so I make it a little purple there sometimes, but I prefer erotic clop to be a little different. That's all.
1583839
Exactly.
1583815 I do hope you didn't think I was attacking you at any point. When I riff, I tend to get into character. The twow in my riffs isn't the twow in real life.
Over all, I do hope you enjoyed it. And hey, if there's anything else you'd like riffed, I'd be happy to do so.
1582195: It's like a green prose, but it's purple instead.