cks you designed to be ~exotic~ or whatever, and those rabid jerks at Disney can only grit their teeth now!
Already shown stuff fixed + new chapter. · 7:50pm Sep 21st, 2013
Sorry about the bulk, but I thought it best to get the stuff I already showed over with so I can show off the new.
I have also updated the version on this site and removed the password, in-case anybody prefer that version to Google Docs. Word of warning, that version is something of a backup so I have not done anything but simply uploaded the Docs version and quickly scrolled trough it.
This is unlikely to change until the story gets published.
For the foreseeable future, the Docs version will be the official one.
And I've tweaked a few things, but only one mayor change in chapter 3. Tim now have two guardians, not one. Basically I realized that a composite character would be scarier and make more sense if I split them again. This will make more sense as the story goes on.
Oh, and regarding the focus shift to Equestria in chapter four... River Road asked me an embarrassingly long time ago why it wasn't a side-story.
The answer to that is that it has to do with the long term plot. I realize it is a frustrating answer but I hope that will also be clearer in time.
I actually intend to have side-stories further down along the line, but that is far into the future at the moment.
The "old" stuff.
And finally, the new:
Chapter 5 - Not So Shy, Anymore... Part One
(One of three, for the record.)
Slightest chance any of the people actually reading this hails from New Mexico? I've done some research, but this is my first time setting even part in a real place I haven't been and considering that I have never even been on that continent makes me feel a bit worried...
Still, I hope you guys like new Fluttershy. She was a hoot to write and I look forward to seeing peoples reactions to her.
