PLEASE DO READ ! Question important for the length of the Maybe series. · 11:16pm Apr 8th, 2013
* Why I am asking *
As most of you hopefully know I do not write for likes or for a feeling of self gratification. I write because I like my story and I figure if I have 5 likes then I have 5 people who are reading the story, and who are also liking it.
Another thing most of you might remember is that not to long ago I almost got banned from this website due to the way I post these stories; And now that part 25 is a stone throw from me I have a very important question I need a answer to if I am going to keep defending the way I post for the future.
* Question *
- I need to know how many people are actually follow this story? Yes I see that I have 80 follower but what I also see is that after 21 I lost a lot of views/likes.
Very rarely do I every care about the like or view stuff, its just with 25 next and the other ideas and plans for the series I just want to know if I am losing people or something because of the length.
* Question end *
(End statement)
NOW in noooo way was I considering stopping the series, I wrote the darn thing for myself and posted it for a shit and giggle. Hits why the first one is "MAybe I could..."
SO fear not those few of you I know still read ! I am just trying to see if I am going to cut more parts or not so that I don't get in trouble in the future.
I know blogs are a waste of time because its just a ramble of someone's tex but if you do read this and want to voice your thoughts please comment below.
no i like it it just is that some like me just read lots of fictions and cant keep up with every update
Keep it going as long as you want, i myself may take a wile but i will read it eventually and rally it is not that long i have read a story that is longer than all of the current maybe chapters out there
992069 i forgot something
I think some people may think you rushed twilights pregnancy to much. This didn't bug me really.
Some people probably didn't like you killing discord. I'm somewhat not liking it but discord isn't needed really.
Some people may not like that violet could turn out to be mute. I have to agree with this myself, its kinda an interesting idea but.... It feels too forced to me.
A temporary problem would be OK but violet being mute forever... Is kinda heart breaking
I still read the Maybe series, I just have a lot to do before I can check to see if the next part is out.
Its great man keep the shit up
I try to read every update you give straight away, because i actually like your writting.
... No i don't read any thing of your stuff... arrrg... now i'm smirking like an idiot... *caught*
Well I have some things on my mind about the -WHOLE- Storyline.
- First of all, to throw Twi and ... 'Anon' in the misery that Violet is mute, is simply an stroke of genius.
Please, IF you going to solve this 'problem', take muuuuuuuuuuuuuch time ok? ^^
- Twi's pregnancy was really too fast, but acceptable.
- I highly doubt that Discord is dead, even if we consider him, by logic, only to be a part of the almighty chaos it self, still he would be simply unable to die.
Chaos was before all things and will remain if everything else is gone.
Chaos is the only thing beside Order that is truly eternal.
For the Fact that Discord isn't Chaos it self, that is simply impossible, it would simply annihilate everything we can even think of, Discords body or even spirit can 'die' but he would in this situation just return to the chaos and be reborn out of it.
Probably even without his memories or even totally different, BUT Discord WILL return, that is the nature of all things eternal.
- Also since Violets birth, the Story had become somehow, how to put it, well... boring, not like "the story has become uninteresting" more like everything has slowed down.
More like the outer world around Twi and Anon seems to have ceased from existence.
Social interaction is the most usual lifeblood of an Story and is considered the most prolific (as far as my translation of this term is correct) overall.
Based on the fact that with Violet the MAybe series has become a socially/society based storyline, at least based on what i have read XP... the lifeblood from Action is missing.
This should be filled or else MAybe will maYBE die.
Note: the 'lifeblood Type Action' IS in fact a part of the 'lifeblood Type social interaction', but it is not so easy to see that and it is considered an so often and prolifically used 'lifeblood' type, that it is in fact considered to be an own type of it self.
I hope that helps ^^
P.S.
and now some thing to let you think about and enjoy... tehehe...
Text from Goethe's Faust.
Mephistopheles Introduction!
Song Tanzwut - Götterfunke.
Refreng
mfg Leux.
By the way, did i ever mentioned
i do read your updates as soon as i notice them, but i often(read: usually) forget to like them
992438
How is there no life blood? the last pert had a changeling
993766
Yeah!... No what i meant was, over all, there was no much lifeblood. Changeling is good, "Lifeblood Type: Action" ^^
But still there is, until now, not enough lifeblood. MAybe needs more.
Changelings are heralding of lifeblood, because they are classifiable as antagonistic toward the most others.
So for they heralding of conflicts, devilishness, miseries, sorrow, tragedy.
But only promises and actions are the real deal.
"I'm a fragment of that part, what was the whole, before all times. A part of the darkness which give birth for the light."
If someone which is portrayed as evil, but isn't really evil, recite Mephistopheles, than the epicness(i know it isn't even a word...) increase, by the factor of 2.71... lol...
I still read the series and I am going to continue to read the series whether you like it or not. the series is my favorite series and I have barely any favorites at all because i dont like reading but this series is my favorite....
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my...
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favorite...ever..in the history of the entire world...ever.
993809
So more original FATTY twist and more character interaction is what i'm getting from this? Something that provokes the reader to a feeling just off of messing with there heads for knowing something.
obviously with more then a few characters
And if that's not what was suggested them i'm confused ---- either way I still will be thinking along those lines...well might be after 25 (already been planning it for a bit so can't change)
Anyway, thanks for the comments everyone
994332
GOLDEN so fu*king golden!!! ^^
but ("eeyup"}-
994881
cool, now i have something to do after 25
as if i dont
994331
Thanks for the nice comment
Mind if I ask what your OC's name is?
1000552 i dont really have. can you make one for me? I was thinking some where along the lines of pinpoint or something like that. at first it was going to be a unicorn and a Pegasus that were best friends that fused together by one of the unicorns crazy experiments and now the two share one body as an alicorn. he never misses...anything. i think his cutie mark are crosshairs? or something thats accurate.
1001138
Oh you have a whole story for for your oc hu? Not a bad idea you going to write it?
Also i don't make OC names I don't even have one fore myself lol
1001925 i cant write for my life but i can come up with bits of a story someone else can make if they want to. anyone thats not me. like, for example someone who has already written a couple of stories. *cough* *cough*
1002525
Well I do like to help new writers get started on there first story, I doubt I could write an OC story especially for an OC that's not mine.
But do message me if you ever change your mind on writing it, I have no problem with writing a chapter or two to help you get started. I already do that for some people on this website , I would just not have the time to start a new story, at least not while i'm doing the MAybe series.
1003114 i would like that very much. it still will hard for me to come up with detail and a=the plot and other things a story needs all i have is a few ideas
1003794
well keep thing and message me if you ever want to take the first step to it.
1004561 what about right now?
...
1005045
If you would like around 9 pm est I get on Skype, your welcome to add me and i'll see if we can come up with something. Or just message me what you are wanting to do and i'll get back with you.
Skype name : Fat1thatyoulove
1005119 i cant skype i have no mic or cam and ill message with what i came up with
1006039
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1006162>>1006039
he, plot line isn't so bad for me, trying to word things out so they are not confusing or compacted is a bit of a problem. another issue is time since my work is giving me more hours (more hours is more money thou). a new issue is.. I have had another story idea on the back burner... and i recently came up with a third story idea. "brain stop coming up with story ideas!"
1006681
lol I feel you on that, but the worst thing is finishing a story then saying dang I should delete that chapter and do this... that's a lot of work
1007108
ehh... old blog entry of mine
this is a blog post when my creativity was thrashed and degraded after reading a article on "how to write fan fiction" I nearly can my writing all together and deleted everything i had on the story.
but i pulled myself back out of the funk and continue working on it.
1007778
So dose that mean your still working on a story?
1008112
hehe yes, I finished the prologue and i'm working on chapter 1 right now, the prologue is 9600 words, its long. kinda considering writing an aditional scene for it to bring it over 10k. I like long stories.
1008128
cool, best of luck
1008140
thank you, i don't plan on publishing it till i have several chapter done however.
1008152
Ya, also always post in the day time. That's why I waited to post 25 which is out now.
1008416
he.... well its always daytime somewhere but, were i am its currently 7:13 pm. still day time technically. but understandable, post while people are awake thus your story get noticed and not pushed down the list before it can be read.
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1008454
thought Id just mention chapter 1 broke 3600 words before I called it quits for the night usually Id blog about progress ive made but my hole 4 followers don't seem to care about minor progress updates.
I just felt I needed to put it out somewhere
1009289
I have never had a chapter over 2,300
1009508
when you get into details, stoy get long.