TARDIS landing soon! · 3:50pm Mar 13th, 2012
Now that I'm putting School Daze to bed, I'm going back to 'The Three Hooves' this week. Chapter three is at 2,458 words, so it should only take me until Sunday to get the holes patched.
So, as a present to my long-suffering readers...
Chapter Three: The Edge of Destruction
A happier time, just outside the magical land of Equestria
The doors of the TARDIS flung open as the teen pegasus slammed through. She dropped her groaning baggage before veering off to the side, narrowly missing the console controls. Having been unceremonious deposited on the floor, the brown Time Charger masquerading as an earth pony flicked a small device out of his trench coat. Aiming unsteadily at the doors, they shut just as a large crowd of faceless white things lunged at the opening.
Ditzy pulled herself out of the heap she landed in. Scuffed up, out of breath, and narrow having escaped death, the young mare started flying in circles. “That was AWESOME, Doctor! Can we go back?”
The pony that would one day be called ‘John Smith’ shook his head. “Those dress dolls want to use us as accessories, Miss Doo. It’s better to let the explosives take their course.”
A nervous look crossed his companion’s face. “If they’re still out there, does that mean Madame Rarity is alfalfa orange gutter ball?”
The Doctor smiled and pretended not to hear the aphasic slip. She’s cute when she’s worried.
THREE HOOVES CHAPTER THREE, COMING SOON!
Consarnit, "The Three Hooves" or "The Three Whooves"? And I don't see how a prologue leads to a second and a third chapter; shouldn't it be followed by a first and a second?
31190 Its all very "Timey wimey and spacy wasey".
This is why I need you, Cerulean.