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  • 20 weeks
    Holidays.

    Just a heads up I may not post much during the holiday season but I’ll still try to put out a chapter for one of my stories.

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  • 22 weeks
    Dawn’s new day world building-ponies

    Overview.

    Ponies are the most dominant race on Equis thanks mostly to their alicorn princess Celestia who controls the sun and moon. There are rumors she once had a sister who ruled the moon however that information has not to be confirmed.

    Recently a new Alicorn princess of love, Mia Amore Cadenza, was revealed to the world.

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  • 22 weeks
    Dawn’s new day world building- changelings

    Overview.

    Changelings are insect pony hybrids that consume love for energy and to keep themselves healthy.

    An adult changeling does not require love to survive as they can sustain themselves on an omnivorous diet alone however without love they will be weak and unable to preform magic or conceive offspring.

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  • 22 weeks
    Dawn's new day information sheet. Warning may contain spoilers.

    Here is My current Character information for this story outside of the existing ones.

    Dawn as a Pony.

    Dawn’s Coloration; Sky blue with a Teal mane and green eyes, cutiemark is a Ying yang of the day and night but with a Starburst and Gear for the Dots.

    Starting age; 8 during the rainboom.

    Magic color; light blue.

    Parents;

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  • 24 weeks
    Name ideas

    Hey all, need a name idea for my Pegasus maid character. Her cutie mark is going to be a bird flying out of a gilded cage. I was thinking of something with ‘Breeze’ in it to go along with ‘Forest Breeze’ but any idea is welcome. If anyone wants to suggest her looks as well I’ll probably use it since I’m just thinking ‘dark coat color with light mane’.

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Nov
28th
2023

Dawn's new day information sheet. Warning may contain spoilers. · 3:56pm Nov 28th, 2023

Here is My current Character information for this story outside of the existing ones.

Dawn as a Pony.

Dawn’s Coloration; Sky blue with a Teal mane and green eyes, cutiemark is a Ying yang of the day and night but with a Starburst and Gear for the Dots.

Starting age; 8 during the rainboom.

Magic color; light blue.

Parents;

· Dam: Morning Dew (unicorn, Dark blue coat, Light purple mane and tail, Cutie mark is a Sunrise in the rain)
· Mom: Forest Breeze (Pegasus, Forest Green coat, ocean blue mane and tail, Cutie mark is of a yellow leaf with a lightning bolt on it blowing in the wind)
· Sire: Forest Breeze after using a gender change spell that normally would not lead to foals. (His parents said it was a stud contract so not revealed till later.)

Other Family;

Morning Dew’s side: (not on good terms)

· Sire; Onyx Star.
· Dam; Gilded Sunrise.
· Other parents; Two moms. Gilded Moonrise, Evening Flare
· Siblings; One older sister, Evening Frost daughter of Evening Flare

Forest Breeze’s side: (on good terms)

· Sire; Cloudy Breeze
· Dam; Forest Medows
· Other parents; None but Sire has preformed stud contracts so unknown family
· Siblings; not revealed yet.



Other info; Loves books, misses the internet.

Personality traits: As a normal colt before his memories, he was just a kid who followed the tenants of harmony since he had the book. Now he is a bit more mature with his adult memories but there is bleed through of both sides making his personality a bit less stable currently.

Favorite Game from childhood: Dragon pit

Dawn’s Human Character

Born and lived in the US. Worked from home in the city.

Parrent’s lived outside the city in the burbs.

Brother traveled a lot and sometimes got him strange stuff.

Other memories currently blurry.

Oc characters

Morning Dew: Dam, parent

Forest Breeze: Mom, parent,Sire

Clear Mark: Stallion, Teacher at CSGU, a bit of a tribeliest

Rose Gold: Mare, Teacher at CSGU, Bubbly personality

Feather Duster: Close maid to princess Celestia, Overly Friendly Changeling by the name of Princess Imago only 19 to start.

Guiding Heart: colt’s dorm mother at CSGU

Wild Spark: colt with same class schedule and lives in the Dorm future male friend.

Gale: The only pegasus teacher at CSGU

Healing Horn: Unicorn doctor for the castle.


Just for Clarity in this Alt Universe every pony is normally born during early spring and mares can normally only get pregnant during late spring, here are some current starting ages so far.
Rarity, Bon Bon:14
Derpy: 14
Blueblood:15
Rainbow:10
Fluttershy:10
AJ:10
Pinkie:11
Twilight:8
Spike: not even 1.
Dawn:8
Starlight:8
Sunburst:9
Lyra: 8 maybe?
Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo: 1
Cadence:17
Shining armor:18

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Comments ( 10 )

:rainbowhuh: Bon Bon age confirmed my fears. She a child soldier, since I believe smile is a monster hunting organization and she an full flege member based on cadence addressing her as agent.
That means she got in at early age as a traine. Which is F up considering they sponsored and answer to Celestia. :duck:
Unless 14 is. The equivalent of our 18-20. But that makes the crusaders teens when their shenanigans start. Which kinda take away from their adventure NGL.:applecry:

5756976
So age is weird when you throw in cutie marks since it’s more about maturity for Ponies in this AU

5756979
So cutie marks are essentially the coming of age? :applejackconfused:
But doesn't that mean diamond and silver being adults harassing kids?:twilightoops:

that normally would not lead to foals.

So this interfered with the family curse and allowed him to reincarnate.

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Real life ponies / horses are born able to walk and survive on their own; reach maturity at age 2. Depending on how equine these Equestrians are, 14 isn’t unrealistic given the foundation especially if pubescence lasts about 3-6 years and cutie mark acquisition somewhere around age 7 to 15-18… I think the latter ages was mentioned in the story but I forgot.

Regardless, age 01 CMC: cuteness level >9000!! :rainbowkiss:

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More like young teens harassing pre-teens I would think. The mark doesn’t make them ‘adults’ it’s how mature they act while also having the mark. So like Rarity is a ‘mature marked teen’ since she has her own business while a pony the same age still in school would be an ‘immature marked or unmarked teen’ it’s a maturity/mark/age combo that matters until a pony hits 18 then you’re an adult no matter what.

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Ok that makes sense but bon bon still feels like a child soldier.:fluttershyouch:

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The thing is irl horse don't have such develop brain as humans. The reason our kid take so long to actually do basic thing is the brain development.
But yes it is sound, the con for me is that i always Invision CMC being pre teen kids.
P.s. yes CMC are cute As F, and as foals especially.

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I mean, magic would make it so they develop faster wouldnt it?

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Yeah it’s kind of an odd mix with magic thrown in and them not being human.

I thought Fluttershy was a year older than Pinkie? At least in the show but this is an alt universe of course so at your discrepancy my man. (Not a peev or anything just remembered that when I saw the ages.)

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