Twin Suns Version 2.0! · 11:13am Jun 10th, 2023
Presenting... Twin Suns Version 2.0!
So... that only took me like half a year to get done. And here I thought, "Hey, Feynna. Let's do this totally smart thing you just thought of, it's only gonna take, like... a month or two. Your writing can't be that bad, riiiiiight?" Hah! Past-Me is a moron.
Alright, let's get down to business. I'm not quite sure how I'm going to do this, but at the moment, I'm thinking I'll unlist the chapters for 'maintenance' on the 23rd and re-release them on the 24th. Barring any unforeseen circumstances, that is. It is a very unimportant day of no importance whatsoever, after all.
Just to put this into perspective, Version 2.0 has about-ish ninety-two-thousand words more than the current version, less cumbersome sentences that read 'weird' because my German brain screws up my grammar and spelling, some spicy new scenes here and there, some new secrets, Summer's as woke as ever, and I'm tired. But! I hope you'll like it. Chapter eleven will also feature a new piece of art made by yours truly!
Omg yay!!! I can't wait!!!
Very nice! Can't wait!
Awesome cant wait to see what you come up with.
I thought the original was really good to begin with, so I wish you luck.
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It was good. But not perfect. Which it still isn't, but I can only do so much on my own. I improved a lot since then, though I'm sure I probably made some things worse, but the majority is a lot better now in my opinion.
I quite enjoyed the original. Can't wait to read 2.0.
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Just to clarify, it's not a complete 'rewrite'. It's more of an enhanced version? I have no idea how to put it, but it does have new stuff in it. Like I said, spicy new scenes and interesting secrets. :3
My face when me not finishing the story is a good thing. In any case super excited to read the updated and expanded version of the story.
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Just as I have planned... muahahaha!
Hm
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Hm, indeed. Can I ask what this hm is about?
The "hm" is just a test of your reflex's.... XD sorry I had to Quote that. Well I read the first fic now I'm curious what changes I'll see in the next. This is the video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0_m5rcdv6s0
Oh wow! i will be looking forward to read that!
Oh holy shit didn't see this. Gonna make me finally have to finish this, huh? :p
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Grab a sandwich and settle in. It's a long ride. :P