Slaves To Their Stripes Huge Update! · 9:05pm Apr 21st, 2023
ATTENTION ALL!
So, I’ve not been updating at all recently because I’ve been doing some other stuff in the meantime, however there is also another reason. I’ve been wanting to make changes to S.T.T.S and have hesitated writing parts of chapter 2 because of it. The changes:
1) I want to remove the potions and make it so that all the zebras need are themselves and their fucking fat horsecocks to seduce and ‘convert’ mares to the Z.
And 2) Since the start I’ve had the idea of a zebra character despite not adding one in the end so how about it? The idea is Domina, the futa zebra queen and leader of all zebras, being the one who broke Celestia (one thing I’d have to rewrite) and plays a part in the story as well as owning the princesses as her personal broodmares.
Would you be opposed to this? I’ll probably do it anyway but I’d really like to hear what others think of it.
That's sounds better.
It does sound more Interesting.
Good luck with rewriting if you do it
Go for it!
Okay, I’ve revoked the submission for now so it’ll be back eventually.
You might also want to ensure that the world can continue to function as intended. Remember, Celestia and Luna literally raise and lower the sun and moon every day; if they can't do that due to their magic being blocked, what happens?
I could see a scene where the princesses have to be cajoled by the zebras to do their royal duties; Luna creates a beautiful night sky with their cutie marks covered with stripes, and is rewarded with a proper orgy in her bedroom.
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You know, I could’ve sworn I’d answered this before and checked and you asked the same question as a comment on the story so…
Sorry pal, you get the same answer there where I offer you the choice of choosing between the three options.
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I didn't get to see the comment, unfortunately. I apologize for asking it again.
Option 1) sounds a bit better. Option 2) not so much; feels unnecessary and smells too much of a potion; AKA needing an outside aid.
seems the story was taken off of the site or was it intentionally deleted?
Aye, what happened to the story. Is it down?
In this story gonna be impregnation nd pregnancy of Celestia and Cadance?
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I took it down to edit it. It’ll be back soon hopefully.
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I took it down to edit it. It’ll be back soon hopefully.
Ah so that's what happened. Well guess I'm dropping the story second time around. Well good luck and have fun