Animal lover’s guild re-write

Given the extremely negative reception my story’s gotten, I’ve decided to scrap the old version and start again based upon the feedback I’ve been given.

I’ll maintain roughly the same plot: Cadance goes to a bestiality club and fucks an Orthros. But this time I’m gonna scale things back to make it less over the top and more detail oriented, cutting out some of the fluff for a better story over all.

I’ll leave the old one up until it’s done but once the new version is complete, the first draft is going bye-bye.

Comments

[Black--Soul]

Rather sad, it's not the lack of quality. It's a lack of acceptance of people with certain few points...

[word horse]

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Don’t worry, the next iteration is going to be way better!