Happy Thursday · 8:21pm Mar 16th, 2023
I'm making good progress on chapter 16, which is good news! Though I'm deciding if I want to move a few things around in it to keep with the theme and help pacing
I also finished the opening scene for the chapter one rewrite, which is... Not quite what I imagined in my head. The idea I had would have made it longer, and introduced people and places that don't really matter, so I didn't do it. I'm hoping the changes I have made to the scene will help with flow, readability, and be a bit peas confusing
A big thing I'm working on is adding more chances for the reader to get to know Aella, so I'm working on adding more of her thoughts on things, or showing off some of her quirks, (like how she personifies inanimate objects, for example)
I'm hoping it goes well