Loveless Lovechild Revision Incoming · 7:41pm Dec 4th, 2022
My latest short story Loveless Lovechild is good but I feel it's a bit undercooked. I need to expand the 2nd and 3rd act of the story and develop the relationships of the characters more fully. This change will probably add about 3k words to the final product and it will make the climax less awkward and more well deserved (narratively). 
Most of the people who will read this story will have already read the version I published and that's that. These revisions are more for myself as an author and my personal growth. As well as for anyone who follows me and enjoys my writing. If you're reading this blog post, my revised version is probably something you'll enjoy.
I look forward to getting it out soon. It will replace the current work with a note that the piece was edited. I also am excited to continue writing The 1st Equestria Girl book 2 for anyone following that story.
Cheers and Brohoof everypony /)
