143816 Well I have only read chapter 1 so far. (Mostly because of distractions and being busy) However I found it interesting that Fluttershy would just disappear like that. I really enjoy how well you wrote the first chapter as well.
143809 Anything in particular? I'm still ginna write it my way, if that's a concern to you, but I would like to know what's so interesting about it. Maybe I can't see it that way because it's coming from my head? I don't know, but I can't seem to think of why it's good... I should probably go work on that thing they call "self esteem", instead of modesty. I might have OD'd a little!
Hey, i was just wondering, what is it that you like about Lost Kindness? I can't seem to come up with anything that I particularly like, so I'm trying to get some feedback here. Thank you for the help.
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Well I have only read chapter 1 so far. (Mostly because of distractions and being busy) However I found it interesting that Fluttershy would just disappear like that. I really enjoy how well you wrote the first chapter as well.
143809 Anything in particular? I'm still ginna write it my way, if that's a concern to you, but I would like to know what's so interesting about it. Maybe I can't see it that way because it's coming from my head? I don't know, but I can't seem to think of why it's good...
I should probably go work on that thing they call "self esteem", instead of modesty. I might have OD'd a little!
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It has an interesting plotline.
Hey, i was just wondering, what is it that you like about Lost Kindness? I can't seem to come up with anything that I particularly like, so I'm trying to get some feedback here. Thank you for the help.